Reviews for Blonde Memories
Hecseferblade chapter 11 . 4/27
I’m honestly curious how their interactions will go and how awkwardly cute they will be around each other.

One hug thing I’m looking forward to is how Weiss and Blake will be handled. Especially the whole secret Faunus thing. Also Blake seems especially upset with Weiss. Is it because of the butterfly effect or is it the immediate “flaunting” of status from being mobbed when she didn’t want to be?
TheBoxGhost117 chapter 11 . 4/23
Its interesting to see the changes in Jaune and Weiss from them knowing eachother so long, and how that ripples out to the rest of the group.

Yet Blake is still a stuck-bitch.
hypernova2718 chapter 11 . 4/22
Thank you for the chapter. I think I am just as confused as Weiss was at Pyrrha's joking manner.

As you mentioned in the note, I should like to see Jaune & Weiss actually getting together too.

Keep writing.
TheSlySage chapter 11 . 4/21
loved this btw
Uday Sra chapter 11 . 4/21
good
ChildofWar chapter 11 . 4/21
So... who gets the doggo? Cuz ya split the sisters up and their are options now.
Personally I’m curious to see how Jaune and Nora would interact with the smol pupper as a team pet.
Zap797 chapter 11 . 4/21
Love to see another chapter come out! Didn't even hesitate to start reading once I got the notification.

I do have one gripe, though, and it isn't even related to the plot or anything. Just the bit of 'Nora breaking legs' and 'she loves pancakes' is a bit overdone. It just makes Nora's character a little...cheap? She's more than the running jokes, after all. By all means, keep her spontaneous and quirky. The Detective bit was funny! Just don't dumb down the characters? Like...making them into their RWBY Chibi selves? Even if they're side characters with little to no limelight, don't neglect them!

With that out of the way, I do like how the plot is going so far, and the characters that are in focus are being written well, and in line with how you made changes to the canon. I'm honestly excited to see where you are going to take things, so I will wait patiently for the next update.
GunBlade2020 chapter 11 . 4/21
Hi there

Sheesh, the last 3 paragraph really hit you in the heart, I hope Jaune will get his plan going...

Anyway, keep up the great writing and stay safe!
SomberFlight chapter 11 . 4/21
Whoever said that the story was completed because they somehow got to "meet" clearly didn't read the story, Weiss and Jaune haven't talked in the last 11 chapters for more than what... once? Twice? I'm sorry, but that does not constitute as having met up. In fact, they're acting like strangers with how quiet they're to each other... you sure they were friends before coming to Beacon? And I don't buy that "fans swarmed them" bullshit, maybe that exact instance sure, but was Weiss giving away autographs the SINCE THE INITIATION? If not, they clearly had time to sit down and talk, but it appears they never DID, for some weird reason. I'm sorry, but this is too big of a plot hole to even think about, what the hell happened here?
Sunrayz chapter 10 . 4/16
insert compliment here
*happy noises*
TheSlySage chapter 10 . 4/3
just binged this and its great!
hypernova2718 chapter 10 . 3/30
Thank you for the chapter. Keep writing.
Thomas Knightshade chapter 10 . 3/28
Good to see you back. I like the way you portrayed Blake in this chapter. She was extremely antagonistic and hypocritical, which is what she was in the first couple seasons. I'm writing a story and this gave me an idea of what to write. Keep up the good work!
tonytaker chapter 10 . 3/18
Nicely done I'm looking forward to the next chapter
GunBlade2020 chapter 10 . 3/18
Hi there

When will Jaune and Weiss actually have a nice sit down...

Anyway, keep up the great writing!
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