| Reviews for D'Arc Is Not Evil |
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   AdmiralFyre chapter 4 . 12h A damn good read so far during a Hurricane. Always had a weird spot for those out casted Jaune stories. |
| noble4259 chapter 17 . 7/24 Good chapter but I strongly dislike the thought of Blake and Ruby having a love triangle with Jaune. I’m fine with them liking him but the pairing needs to stay Arkos I’d ask me. Blake May have shown romantic interest in Jaune but he’s never had that way for her. Appreciation for the things she did to help him absolutely but he should just be with Pyrrha. Ruby well I think those romantic bridges have been burnt and she’ll be lucky to just have him as a friend again. |
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/24 heres hoping that jaune will snap at weiss and yang telling them that if they had the chance they wouldve danced on his grave or something |
| noble4259 chapter 13 . 7/23 first review here for this stoey so I’ll be brief. It’s a good read. There’s some issues I take wth how you had the fight scene with Jaune play out, the second one to be exact. You kept repeating Jaunes name over and over again. My advice, use he, the Arc etc to spice up the word names. It’s a little annoying to see Jaunes name fly up six times in a row. The fight felt a little stale but it is what it is. If you’d like help on writing fight scene I believe I can be of assistance. Good work |
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/17 How big was the Glavenus compared to Jaune? |
| hirshja chapter 17 . 7/16 Unless you plan on writing out the entirety of the team name every time, it’s probably better if you just use JNPAR for Juniper. That, way it’s something which readers can actually remember to be the team name. Instead of spelling J.N.V. LA. In my head, I would much rather be able to simply say the name of the team. |
| freddy.lane.1 chapter 17 . 7/16 that was a nice little chat they had, and i did not expect anyone to use HI3 honkai classifications on . |
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/15 I’d add the Leviathan as a Judgement class also. |
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/15 Why not go for JAVLN? |
| Uday Sra chapter 17 . 7/15 Good |
| tonytaker chapter 17 . 7/15 Nicely done I enjoyed that |
| DragonTetho chapter 8 . 7/15 OKAY I CHANGE MY MIND, JUST HAVE BLAKE, PYR, AND JAUNE! 3SOME! |
| DragonTetho chapter 4 . 7/15 Is it possible for ya' to add in Ruby if she isn't getting paired to Oscar? |
| DragonTetho chapter 3 . 7/15 Yeah, I would be pissed but then again if I saw how hard that someone trains and works up for it I would've instantly forgiven him but not without giving him a good punch after that? We be best buds. |
| Patriot-112 chapter 17 . 7/14 And so we've come to V2. And things are about to get a little crazy from here on out. |
