This should be in crossovers, but it is still a fantastic story

Problem, Jaune knows from the chapter 2 aura is a forcefield that can protect from damage but the questions it in chapter 3.

I feel like a lot of people in the reviews are suggesting that Jaune hide all his power and basically be a generic edgelord lone wolf protagonist which IMHO is not how a fucking Jedi acts. I love what you've done with Jaune's characterization and i am looking forward to the future of this story.

P.S. Jar-Li is the inquisitor isn't she.

I feel like jaune shouldn’t have shown off his lightsaber at all. He could of easily killed that Grimm with the force then played it off as being a telekinesis semblance. Or fight it hand to hand, we know that Jedi do practice hand to hand martial arts. Now that everyone at beacon know about the lightsaber, all it take is for someone to upload a picture or a video to the CCT network then EVERYONE on remnant will know about it. Drawing unwanted attention not only from the kingdom’s governments and the 11th sister but from Salem’s group and the white fang, then everyone will want it for themselves. Just like with glynda the kingdoms will demand it especially ironwood, I won’t be surprised if he tries to steal it and proclaim it’s for “the good” of atlas and the world to fight against Salem. I just expected Jedi jaune to be WAY more cautious in showing off his abilities and weapon especially after surviving order 66 for so long.

the pacing feels rushed we’re already at forever falls. I think you should show more interactions between team rwby and jnpr, especially how Jedi jaune interacts with someone as overbearing and expressive as yang, that would be a hilarious duo. Also beacon needs more classes than history, Grimm studies and combat class(I find this hilarious that the students are learning how to fight humanoid opponents but not monsters like they should). The show never went into detail about the curriculum that the students learn to become huntsmen and huntress. Last thing I really don’t like that Pyrrha is becoming force sensitive, especially this EARLY in the story. I never really liked her character because of her mary sue tendencies. She’s already a four time champion with the invincible girl title, the best fighter in beacon with an op semblance, pick by ozpin to become the next fall maiden, overall nice girl with hardly any flaws besides saying sorry a lot and not expressing her feelings very well. I mean she SOLOED a whole team without struggling or getting hit. Granted they were first year and team crdl but still she a boring character. Giving her the force just seems overkill and will takeaway all the tension whenever she fights(there was hardly any there to begin with anyway).

Don't let Ozpin know Jaune secrets as well as everybody else, it would be TOO early. Perhaps it would be best they don't know it at all because to an extent it will be the same as telling the people that your a isekai protaginist that the world your in right now used to be FICTION for you, it will be just too weird and out of place. At the same time if Jaune will stay in Remant for good or a long time it be best both he and the others to focus on Salem and saving the world from her rather than them being burden by knowing that Jaune came from space and the empire might come to remant for him with star destroyer, again if that happens it will be too weird for us audience. The inquisiter is a nice touch she will be good match for the story but please let it be ONLY her that came from the outside that came to Remnant, adding more characters or maybe some elements from the star wars universe to the world of Remnant will only confuse more of the readers and make us feel strange that some things from the starwars shouldn't been in here and makes the story more confusing, wierd and hard to picture. Just don't be TOO ambitous to this story. Overall so far so good infact it amazing keep going, just consider what I said please.

Jaune, and all Jedi, really need to keep a better grip on their lightsabers. You don’t see canon Jaune dropping his sword so often, the force has made him lazy.
Also, did the 11th Sister take into account the fact that swords have edges. A lightsaber can cut with any part of itself, that’s why the Emperor’s style is so deadly, he uses the tip as the main attacking method, a sword has either 1 or 2 edges, it wouldn’t be improbable that she might hit someone with the broad side due to muscle memory thinking all parts of it are dangerous.

Man,Ozpin is a dick.
Fantastic story by the way

Glad ur listening to the readers and spacing ur story apart more by making the field trip come up later on in the story rather than in chap. 6

Wait you're already doing the field trip thing? Kind of rushing through the story aren't you? I think you should take some more time to explore things more, have Jaune get to know his team and others for instance. There was a lot we didn't see happen in the show for instance so why not show it yourself instead of just basically doing parts of the series? It's a lot more interesting when we can see more character interactions and stuff than just constantly pushing the plot along as this is a written work and not a movie or TV series with a time limit to work with.

I think you should take some time to really have them interact more. Plus Jaune still needs to learn how to read or did you just skip over all of that? Technically this is only his what, third day at the school so far? Plus I think the festival was more like six months away given that they didn't get to that until half the first year was over with. I mean we never saw Jaune's reaction to faunus in the story. Sure he knows about aliens but he didn't react at all to them or how odd it is for a whole species to be so different from each other like how unique faunus are. Never saw him on how scrolls are supposed to work, how the holographic images seems to be of higher quality than in SW as they aren't all just one color with some static over it for instance.

Plus he'll have to learn how to read to start researching parts, which again, he would have to get so much custom work done in Atlas it would require the kind of money only SDC or Atlas military could provide. Even in Star Wars, ships and hyperdrives aren't cheap for a reason. I still think you didn't give the ship enough damage for literally crashing into a planet as it should not be flyable with the kind of damage that would cause.

So yeah, you're kind of rushing through the story at this rate you're going to have him run into Cinder in like 5 chapters if you keep this up. I know you said you wanted to avoid a Rise of Skywalker thing but you're starting to head that way if you keep up this kind of pacing. It's a fanfiction, have some fun with the story, take time to explore more with the character and think of interesting things you'd like to see happen and play around with them. There is no limit in a fanfiction so there is no reason to keep with the stritch format of a movie or series as both have limits to what they can show. You don't, so go nuts with it.

Well that was a new grimm you used, I take it that you used the myth of the cyclops from Greece as the base of it plus you called it a 'titan' which also comes from them. Which works kind of like how you used Blackbeard as well in this as a pirate. I wasn't expecting the inquisitor showing up so soon but I guess being on the other side of the planet she won't find Jaune anytime soon.

I lost count but have you given Jaune at least 3 different light saber forms? I think that's enough if it is as out of the seven forms only one person trained in all of them and that was Anakin. Most Jedi I beilieve only ended up using 2 or 3 max. Hell Obi-Won while knowing a couple stuck with the defensive stance the most for example. I'm also wondering how Jaune will recharge his weapons. Both the lightsaber and plaster use very speficic energy cells that you can't just plug in and charge. He might have to later on exchance the plaster for a handgun that uses dust for example as when the clips run out of energy that's it. The lightsaber the power cell he might be able to modify to run on another energy source but it wouldn't last as long I bet.

so far so good, one thing the line Blake said "hank you for your council. You seem wiser than you appear," that made me roll my eyes. I'm sorry but that line is so bad. I mean who talks like that? RWBY is made by modern day people and the show reflects it, this line was very unnatural and especially not something Blake would say. She's more into simple and to the pont talking. So most likely she would have said something more along the lines of "I see your point."

Most of the characters talk like regular people I think Weiss is the only one that is normally a bit more formal. Like she'll say Can not instead of can't for instance. I may have to go back and double check on that one though.

So far the story is still intereting and I do wonder how things will work out and with this new Jaune as well. I do hope you're not hinting that Jaune was taken from Remnant in the past because that might be a bit too much. Plus it's not like they'll know him on sight either after over a decade and most likely thinking he was dead by this point.

Well so far this is a bit interesting start. You know that the Inquisitor will show up much later in this story of course as it would take her time to land. And I see you made him a Jedi Guardian with the blue blade. Given they are more physical with the force I think that would fit for him. Although it is going to be tough for him to learn a new language might take him all of first semester for that. Plus he would most likely take notes in Galatic Basic so I hope that gets brought up.

A couple of things though, why would he think it's Yavin? It's not that well known of a system and I doubt he actually would have ever been there or known about it. I know you just wanted to make a star wars reference but try to keep the references make some kind of sense as it really doesn't fit. Also him thinking he could just remake a hyper drive engine on a primitive world doesn't work either. He should have known it was impossible for him as unless he studying space ship engeineering he wouldn't even know exactly what to make. Hell in the SW universe most people don't know how hyper drives work they just copy the desgins that did. It would also take the industrial might of Atlas to even come close to building an engine an that's only with the full specs on hand. So he's pretty much stuck, also I doubt the ship is flight worthy anyway as a crash like tha would make it's frame warped and damaged and more stress would tear the ship apart.

I do hope you try to keep the core of Jaune's canon character still in here, yeah he will be different but if you make him too different than it's just an OC with his face and name copy and pasted on. I'm also curious about how the romances come in this story given that the Order had that messed up 'no attachements' thing and how that will play into the story. I think moments like that you can show more of Jaune's more canon side of things with him being unsure and not knowing how to handle those types of situations as he's never been in them before.

I have to say, this is pretty interesting. Looking forward to where things go from here. I do hope, however, that once the Inquisitor tracks Jaune down, which my guess will probably happen around Forever Fall, the story doesn't continue along the main plotpoints of RWBY canon. Not that there's anything wrong with that, but you have a pseudocrossover with Star Wars. You can take full advantage of that. Have Jaune, RWBY, and JNPR flee into space as the Empire invades Remnant, for example. You don't necessarily have to do that, but it's an example.

Regardless, looking forward to what comes next.

They may have seen Jaune using his lightsaber but they haven't seen his ability to use the Force which could be on par with Miss Goodwitch's own semblance (minus ability of seamless repair).

So Pyrrha now knows what has been bothering her partner, and not something she expected. Ozpin now got some leads on Jaune's history and his findings should help pinpoint his own family. Did Cardin heard of Jaune's own outburst?

I wonder what the Arc family is doing right now considering their only son got kidnapped by aliens. Future reunion would be quite explosive I can guess.

Would we see a fight between Pyrrha and Jaune as that would be quite an amazing duel between them. Pyrrha being a seasoned tournament fighter and Jaune being a mystic fighter plus a war veteran and rogue element due to the purge.

Ok, I wonder how Jaune's ship be featured in the next chapter. That would be quite a bombshell, more so for Nora and Ruby who would go nuts. Yang might be jealous since while she has a bike, Jaune has a ship. Though I recall about its main engine problem right?

The omake is hilarious! Being goaded "Dew it" by both sides of her morality, and then promptly thrown out before landing on her bum.

Am I the only one who's getting Obi-one vibes from Jaune? Superior combat skills and a dash of trolling his opponents? Just have Pyrrha's ancestor be a Mandalorian that crash landed on Remnant and we've got Obi-two.