Reviews for Shin Yokai
AnimeA55Kicker chapter 2 . 12/19/2019
Kurama is clearly going to need that training to beat the fuck out of Susanoo and get his girl.
clown2107 chapter 1 . 12/18/2019
You have an interesting beginning and you don't see every day a protagonist other than Naruto or Sasuke which makes the story something different unlike others.
Abbadon44 chapter 1 . 12/16/2019
Great start!
mastercheif1229 chapter 1 . 12/10/2019
Absolutely incredible first chapter! REALLY looking forward to the next one!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2019
Great first chapter, please make more soon because their rarely any good yasaka x either naruto or kurama.
A-humble-random-reader chapter 1 . 12/8/2019
dont make kurama bow down bro...make him a bad motherfucker that makes other bow down before him...gods and all..give the poor bastard some love..he deserves to be untouchable...

PS: add romance and fluff..if harem dont go after taken women and max 3 [ 5 if readers want ]...Godlike MC...no slutty women..for once make a different dxd fanfic with respectful women?
Old steamer chapter 1 . 12/6/2019
If you need a name for the next chapter still might I suggest naming it “finding a new reason to live” mostly because a event like this would leave scars maybe not enough to drive someone to suicide but pretty dam close to it and depending on how close Kurama was to his father in this life he is definitely going to be at or near that state of depression when he comes down from the battle rage and bury’s whatever is left of his father in this life heck that might be how he ran into Yasaka in the first place after all she can sense negative emotions thanks to her predisposition to senjusu as well as get an impression of what’s causing them when she is close enough to the source of them and since she is young, inexperienced, and obviously lonely she might try to find whom ever is so sad and comfort them.
thermalsnipern7 chapter 1 . 12/4/2019
Kurama centric? This is new.
Play-Staition Ranger Mk7 chapter 1 . 12/4/2019
I've got a good Crossover that you can try; RWBY and SPAWN.

Since you've made Ruby Rose a Dragon Empress, a Death Goddess, an Heiress of the Highest Entity, a Guardian and a Witch Princess, it would be fitting to see what she would do if she were to become a HellSpawn.
Stratos263 chapter 1 . 12/3/2019
Good job on the start.
TeraBaapBSDK chapter 1 . 12/3/2019
well, rinne-sharingan cannot be given to another person. Rinne-sharingan is eye produced by only 10-tails and pure otsutsuki blood people(as told in boruto). you can't just go around giving it to everyone.
Giving MS and Byakugan would have been better for future power ups and storyline. You just killed it in the start of the fic. So, i can safely assume that you will not be continuing this fic for more than 10 chapters.
Crossovernaru chapter 1 . 12/3/2019
You have grabbed my interest in this story. Kurama is one of my favourite beings in anime and it's kind of a bummer that there are not more Kurama centric stories on this site.

At first, I thought this was going to be a story that involved Kurama and the others being reincarnated as they are. However, I find reincarnation to be far more interesting. I am curious to see how you will make Kurama grow as a character in this story.

I am hoping that we will get a few original chapters before heading into the present day of canon.

Also, I approve of the pairing between Kurama and Yasaka. One thing I would like to see is their relationship develop over a period fo time instead of instantly falling in love. By giving time to develop their relationship, it will help to further their character development.

Powerwise, I understand that Kurama and the others need to be powerful. DxD wise I would place their abilities as equal to that of the four satans and could even place them among the top 10 strongest beings, especially Kurama. In fact, I can't help but wonder if he will challenge some of the other powerful entities in the DxD verse like Draig, Albion and Indra. Although I don't really see him answering to anyone including gods that are weaker than him. However, I can see him wanting to be near Yasaka

I also am curious to see Kurama reunite with his siblings and to learn about their backstories as well.

I am looking forward to the next chapter. I hope you update soon.
Temsen chapter 1 . 12/3/2019
Looks very interesting.
I remember another Kurama X Yasaka, but that one stopped rather quickly I think.
Bonus points if Kunou will have a brother that's named Naruto, heh. :D
Obersturmfuhrer chapter 1 . 12/2/2019
Ok got baited, eager to see kurama in actions. But you said next chapter the bijus would be trained by shinto fraction, why they need to trained again? I mean they're bijuu and their previous hosts are really powerful, heck they're already powerful enough, more than yasaka especially kurama.. so, why the heck they need to train? Their ego and pride won't let them bow to the shinto's, and if you say they need to learn to control their power, then they already had completed control of them.. they're not need of training, especially under guidance of someone that saying they're god/goddess. Just let them meet yasaka naturally, and then kurama see a naruto like personality and kindness at yasaka, and that enough reason for him to be with her.
Hugo0974 chapter 1 . 12/2/2019
Interesting first chapter!
Although I strongly disagree with your concept of powers level (Kurama complete have just as much power as True form Sirzechs), this is still a interesting plot, so I will keep following.
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