another great chapter

An exciting fanfic I have to say and with a very rare few of most good Kurama crossover fanfics. I have to say this is the best. Well, hope to see more of this in the future. But be sure to check over for a few missing words, kinda breaks the follow of the story.

Buen capitulo, con este entrenamiento Kurama definitivamente será más poderoso, ahora a esperar el siguiente capitulo.

THANK YOU for not having Kurama throw a tantrum about getting a teacher. I HATE that trope SO MUCH, ITS SO STUPID.

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Nice chapter and good fight scene with the siblings and the character development is great so far. Please keep up the good work.

I still don't like the fact that you just sort of dropped in asura because it was convenient for the plot. I understand why you did it, I just think that maybe there were better ways and perhaps you were a bit too hasty with that decision. They are still kids and I don't know if I'm wrong but I had the impression that yasaka was at least a century old when canon started. Kurama has already changed so much. I believe he could have learned to control his hate in that time or learn a different way to use senjutsu. He's a couple centuries old, I'm sure he has enough experience to figure something out. This whole thing you did with Asura is just way too convenient.

There's also the fact that Asura is probably more powerful than any dxd character which totally unbalances the power scale of dxd.

I liked the fight scene of the bijuu and the fact that they also have ems. Here you show us that kurama can control his negative emotions regarding the eyes successfully. He also shows plenty of care for his siblings. Your showing us that kurama is already rapidly improving in controlling his negative emotions and he's trying to show more positive emotions. This is why this training with senjutsu bothers me. Because if supernatural beings have one thing than that is time. They are not humans, they can live for centuries. You also said that if kurama looses control while using senjutsu than no one can stop him. Are you saying that he is as strong or stronger than a full powered sirzechs at that point? Because I believe even if that was the case than the shinto pantheon will be more than enough to handle him. Yasaka herself is considered to be a top tier ultimate class being with the ability to go toe to toe with super devils for a period of time. And these are gods that we are talking about. As powerful as sirzechs is, he's no god. And kurama is very important to the shinto pantheon because he is probably going to be the future leader of the yokais just based on his strength. They definitely wouldn't want a god from another pantheon training him, even if there isn't any ulterior motives.

Please turn it into a time skip where Kurama returns next chapter. I want to see him full power beat the heck out of devils. Not to mention the unholy hell he will unleash on Issei when the idiots go pervert on his wife.

How you mentioned that Shinigami is creating zanpakto, can you put a young Unohana there, for at least an appereance?

nice chapter thx for writing it
yay for training montage start :D

I really like this story.
Hope you continue with the updates

I’ll say it again, if asura is number 2, that means is number 1, her being able to destroy earth is being generous since she can only destroy the surface, while kaguya was cabable it destroying dimensions which are complete with their own planet, sun and moon via the GIANT TRUTH SEEKING ORb, therefore if asura’s is just number 2, there is no way in hell he can beat kaguya.

Why the hell are you creating problems that LITERALLY don’t need to be there

This is nice

This story has so much potential. I do hope that have have kurama take the lead in the faction and start to strengthen it and make it stronger as a whole. If he is going to be with Yasaka, I would like to see him care for the people as well. thanks for posting! looking forward to future chapters!

enjoying it so far.