- Sharing
So essentially MJ (Pyrrha) and Gwen (Yang) decided to share Peter (Jaune) to keep him from performing anymore harebrained experiments on himself.

(Note, this is only based on the girls hair colour, not personalities. As Yang has more in common with MJ than Gwen and the reverse is true for Pyrrha. More Gwen than MJ.)

- Upgrades & Plans
Could he further upgrade the other recruits, so they'd end up mutate hybrids as well?

And why do I have this feeling that Ozzie also has a breeding program in mind.

Even if Jaune is currently incompatible, doesn't mean he need to always be incompatible. All depends upon whether or not he'd be willing to make the necessary changes to his partner.

Next step in evolution beyond even the Empowered?

- Muscles
Have to disagree here. Those with white muscle fiber are referred to as wiry. White muscle fiber is for endurance.

Red muscle fiber, which is for explosive movement, like a sprinter and their legs or the upper torso and arms of weightlifters. Thar's all about power.

Now pink muscle fiber is the rare breed, it's what you find with most martial artists, acrobats and swimmers. Compact muscles. They can produce 75 percent of what red muscle fiber can and have an endurance equivalent of 75 percent of white muscle fiber.

Meaning they can overpower a white muscle person and outlast a red muscle one.

Combine that with the more compact muscle tone not interfering with agility. Well, you get the smaller toned martial artist just dodging and weaving around the attacks made by the hulking mountain of muscles.

Playing rope-a-dope, until they're running on fumes at which point they get battered down.

*shrugs*

As for the aesthetic angle, most of those people will still be doing exercises that lead to the creation of red muscle fiber. The Gym enthusiasts essentially.

- Shots
Additionally, Pyrrha might want to consider smaller ammo than those bolts she used before.

Concussive force is great and all, but sometimes piercing power is more important, especially if it's too small for your opponent to notice and thus block with armouring.

Piercing its eye (as it had already lost one in four) with say a rebar or an actual javelin would've been more useful. Not quite sure how it's self TK would've figured into that, but it would've been another attack angle for Jaune. Turning the bar into thermite, both burning out its eye and possibly burning through to the brain.

*shrugs*

But what is done is done.

Aww why not Terminators it would have been so cool

Had potential but it's mostly just edgy wangst.

Very very entertaining

A warning of the major plot divergence would be a good idea.

Aside from that, this looks fucking dope. Leggoooooo

Dieing to see more! Cant wait for more.

Imma follow

This story started out good, but all this teenage angst killed it for me.

damn can't wait for the wolvenheim fight that is going to be really fucking cool

good story

one time I dropped a 25 on my face doing skullcrushers

Noooo, how did you put out 70k words in 3 months, and then a 3 month hiatus? I need moreeeee!
Legitimately though, it took me about an hour to get through chapter 1 because the beginning seemed so boring, and there was no real hook. The only reason I even tried was because Nora was in the pairing, which is rare as hell, but it was combined with others, which is like a 1 in a million chance to find on top of having Nora he with someone not Ren. But I almost gave up, before I managed to hit the halfway point on chapter 1. Then I read the rest of the chapter plus 11 more in the next 5 hours. Why the stop? This is too good. I couldn’t help but imagine an Alien though, as in a Xenomorph. Waiting for some tail penetration, haha.

Im not saying that I hate this fic or anything but im just going to point out that what you did with Jaun is kind of stupid. With his telekinesis, he can reforge his body, break down his muscles, and make it stronger than before. He literally does not need to train. Just sitting around and concentrating on his telekinesis will make him stronger, both in body and his ability. So why in the is he still doing excercises?

Quite a fanfic. And quite a lot of drama. But Jaune has now gained the love and affection of two of his girls. Very nice, very awesome.

And man, is he a power house. Really incredible. o.O

Keep up the excellent work!