I really like the idea of Sitri also having trouble with her emotions; it's a small detail, but it has pretty big implications for the relationships between Rhea, Sitri, Jeralt, and Byleth herself.

YAAAASSSSSSSSSS! DIMILETH IN THE HOUSE, YO!

Oh, man. Loving that Dimileth cuteness right there! I wonder how and what you'll do for the mock battle!

Well, this chapter got me to outright favorite the story.

What a damn triumph.

Well, I mean, I actually just wanted an option that had the humanity of the Blue Lions route and the, uh, "not-ignoring-the-morlocks"-ness of the Golden Deer or Church paths.

I don't care if it's happier, I'm just annoyed that all the routes are lacking and equal to ~60-80% of the tried and true politics-cosmic evil route each.

I love your writing! it is very similar to my own I cannot wait for the next chapter! you embody the characters so well that I can perfectly here them chirping their lines. you do a wonderful job of incorporating the support conversations naturally while keeping Byleth neutral. Also, I love how you make each chapter so personal. I love how you portrayed Sylvain here. It really shows his character development as well. as adds depth to Byleth's transformation from stoic to feeling emotions.
I am on the edge of my chair and stayed up until past five in the morning binging this. ease keep. writing! This is the best Fire Emblem Three Houses retelling I have seen! I almost wish this was canonwe just need the Ashen Wolves).

Bravo and I cannot WAIT for the next chapter!

~Kayleen 3

So, do you hate Rhea?

Also, I like how Sylvain now has the Lance of Ruin. If I had this game, I'd have him equip it.

Uh oh, Jeralt is picking up on Dimitri's possible feelings for Byleth? This is going to be an interesting conversation between the two, and I can't wait to see what you put out next!

I also am here for fluff. I’m loving your take on Dimileth! Good chapter, I’m always happy to see updates! The writing is very good, one particular phrase popped out: “ ...was as if someone had opened their hand to him, bearing the callouses and scars that would be hidden under an elegant glove. "
That is impressive imagery. Keep up the hard work writing!

I am here for the fluff.

I’m enjoying your take on Three Houses. It’s well written and flows nicely. There’s enough differences to stand out plot-wise: a mercenary Byleth opposed to teacher, yet allied noticeably with Dimitri. I like it. Keep up the great story-telling!

Yo what happen to the new chapter

That ending was the most Claudest ending ever. I also love seeing Dimitri trail after her in his adorable awkwardness. I am here for the wholesomeness.

It looks like our resident Ashen Demon and Prince of Faerghus are intrigued in each other. I'm excited to see how you develop their support points

You're definitely taking this onto an interesting direction. I'm very curious to see how the dynamics with Rhea and the academy develop with Byleth. Sorry to hear your personal life isn't too hot right now but happy holidays all the same!