Reviews for Stargazer |
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AK-103 chapter 1 . 6/28 Please continue this |
AK-103 chapter 1 . 5/9 PLEASE UPDATE THIS! IT'S BEEN A LONG TIME! |
Naga986 chapter 1 . 4/21 Update soon please! |
Bibliotheca Mundi chapter 1 . 3/21 This the good shit. Watch out for those their, there and they're though. There are two or three times when 'their' should've been 'there', like the end authors note mentioning not being fond of the sexy stuff. |
Cegorach117 chapter 1 . 2/12 This has ridiculous amouts of potential to be funny as fuck. |
EMIYA KURO chapter 1 . 2/12 Dude you have to! You absolutely have to Continue this marvelous peoce of literature. |
Command8 chapter 1 . 2/5 yes, yes, yes, yes, yes |
KageNo chapter 1 . 1/29 pls more |
PasiveNox chapter 1 . 1/23 great great |
EnriksD8 chapter 1 . 12/25/2019 "a thing for theatrics and showmanship" Great, now Jaune will slowly morph into this odd mix between DIO and Giorno. Not complaining, would like to see what is basically a more theatrical Giorno in Beacon Academy. The katana is an odd choice. Sure, it stemmed from childhood memories of Jaune doing all that cool anime logic stuff, but something similar to a Western sword would fit him better. Doesn't have to be a greatsword, it could be something like a cavalry sword or dueling sword instead. |
Jaerskov Tempestwing chapter 1 . 12/20/2019 Hell. Yes. Give me more. |
GuestGuy chapter 1 . 12/16/2019 Great start! Instead of a katana might I suggest an even larger sword instead - like buster sword levels of large. Makes it even more humorous since it'll make people think he's swinging it no problem with such speed. Just a suggestion though, since i've no problem with the current setup! |
sertry chapter 1 . 12/18/2019 Awesome)) |
NyaNyaKittyFace chapter 1 . 12/17/2019 I love and absolutely NEED more of this story. If you give June a hand to hand fighting style I recommend checking out Hit from Dragon Ball Super. He’s an assassin who can “Skip” time. I absolutely love both Hit’s and Dio’s abilities! Plus sense there’s no gravity, a Jaune’s punches and kicks are going to do a hell of a lot more damage than usual. Oh man the only thing that I can think to make this story better would be “Your next line is”! Seriously Jojo is fucking amazing. |
son of wind chapter 1 . 12/15/2019 Great start! Love stuff like this, so much potential chaos! I think Blake may have some ill feelings about the weapon and style though. It seams very similar to Adam's. |