GO OFF! I feel like there’s characters you can’t judge/hate no matter what fucked up things they did like Sasuke,
Itachi (like he was 13 what the fuck y’all expect him to do? Save the world?)
Naruto (there was this one fanfic that bashed the fuck outta him and I’m like... wha? For why?)
Kakashi (people bash him for not being there for baby Naruto, not being a “good” sensei and all that shit but I’m like... try losing yo daddy sensei and both teammates and never getting therapy)
And BOIIIIII I HATE Minato/Kushina bashing like how tf was they supposed know Naruto wasn’t going to have the best childhood

And I like what you said about having to know the characters past to understand them!

Sage Mode is perfectly reasonable in any world unless there's no Nature of any kind. Sage Mode is the mixing of a person's Chakra with Natural Energy(Natural Chakra would just be normal Chakra) to create Sage Chakra. Though you could also have it so that it's possible to make Sage Mode by mixing Natural Energy with another type of internal energy instead.

I see, thank you.

Ya I see what your saying read a fic where apparently he was a Saiyan and it felt wierd to me, got out of that, he didn't feel like Naruto, plus, imagine a Super Saiyan Naruto, that'd be boring, rather he sticks to the Nine Tails.

I see your point now and would love that. At the end of Naruto he goes to the Dragon Ball world and has to learn a new power to affect the world. While he keeps his own and acts in character.

Ya, an OC Airbender would be dumb lol almost as dumb as a Saiyan Jinchuriki lol.

I agree intensely with the giving OC's all the power ups. Imagine a 10 tailed jinchuriki with sharingan, byakugan, rinnegan, and for good measure, Hashirama AND Madara's cells. Lol, quite the monstrosity.

Oh yea, I did not think about that. Lol, your right my bad.

Dude you need to do more of this. This was one of the things that inspired me to start Fanfiction Woes for DBZ, just talk about the problems you see in Naruto fanfiction, cause I think we know there's plenty more. I'd most certainly read more of this.

Though I got one more question, you can answer in a PM if you prefer. How do you feel about the Sakura bashing, I personally don't like her but even I think it's a bit much lol.

Thank you for answering my question. Have agreat day!

Hey I would love to see your take on OCs, do u think there's anyway to do them right, just don't do it. I'm ok with either one since I have seen so many trash OC's I assume no.

Damn, you got a good list.

Point number 8 I understand except if you put Naruto in a dbz crossover I think he'll need to learn Ki mixed with Chakra if he wants to affect the world. Anywhere that's at Naruto's level or below I understand he needs to just use his own power though.

Also as for the bashing, you see a lot of that shit, I wish people would cool it. I hate Sakura as much you hate Hinata but even I get annoyed that she get's bashed instead trying to make her a decent character.

The second time madara defects on village because he didn't have support from uchiha clan. Uchiha clan at that time didn't want any war continue with senju clan. Thats why uchiha clan support hashirama. The first time is hashirama already want to sacrifice himself to prevents any blood war between them but madara stop him.. ... Uchiha clan was the one who started the war in hashirama-madara generation. Uchiha clan kill Itama senju brutally as a child...

Well this is my last reply. You know his skill already enough to make him come back to village in second. In novel, sasuke WHO the one purpose on sakura...So that moment sasuke was the one who took responsibility not sakura. You have duty on your village but at the same time you have duty as father. Even you can see he didn't bother about sarada and sakura feelings. No he didn't try on his own. Naruto was the one who force him to come back.

Soldier who have active outside home atleast contact their love once a month. Imagine 13 years you married,your husband have technique that makes you easy enough to travel bck,for 13 years he didnt send any latter or message or didnt bother to send message,how do you think sakura feel?Without husband on your side?

He even easily ranked as worst husband and boyfriend in many portal anime and blog.

This situation we can relate more to naruto than sasuke in all aspects. Sasuke is easily relate to people who born with rich/happy family but loses them at young age but have people support him 100% and have everything. Naruto is relate to people who born in rich people who don't know his parents/heritage and constantly being neglected, abuse, torture physically and mentally just because have something that make people afraid...

Rereading my own review made me notice something. The constant fear of someone close to you can grow into resentment and hate to that person. Sasuke and Itachi. I can't imagine Sasuke not fearing his brother after what he did to his clan, his family and Sasuke himself. He didn't want to feel vulnerable, to be afraid of his brother (maybe out of self-preservation instinct; weak means dead), so he turned it around and transformed it into hate and goal to kill the man so that he could be free of all those feelings. And it grew and festered, to the boiling point where all those emotions lead to his madness.

I just wanted to say thanks for making me think on this topic. This unexpected realization just hit me and I definitely gonna use it in my own story :)

Hm, reading your confession about your childhood kinda makes me add a bit from my own personal experience in case someone might find it helpful in writing the effect abuse can have on a person. It's more related to Naruto though rather than Sasuke.

My father was an alcoholic, a pretty rowdy alcoholic. While I do remember a few instances when he raised a hand against me (bless my mom), the most abuse came in a form of psychological and emotional abuse, the constant fear of my father in his drunken state. I grew up in it and it sticks. It sticks so hard that you just can never get rid of it. My father stopped drinking eventually, and I do love him somewhat, but my resentment towards him will never fade. The moment I see him (or anyone for that matter) even mildly drunk (one bottle of ale is enough), every single cell in my body goes on high alert, my brain goes on guard, and I can't look at him, I can't be with him, and I flee as far from him as possible, because if I stay all my anger and resentment might spill out. And I'm an adult now.

Now amplify all of that hundred-fold and you'll get Naruto. He might love Konoha as a whole and not necessarily end up going evil, but he should resent the villagers and never forgive them. There's no way he would have ended as he did if it wasn't a shonen show aimed at the young audience. It simply plays off abuse as nothing serious and instead accidentally promotes children's manipulation and brainwashing.

I'm also 100%

Pity? Of course people pity on you? What you think people want to celebrate happy at seeing you clan got killed? Uchiha or not, people still have sympathy emotion. ...

Sasuke deserted the village because out of frustration and anger? So that's how spoil brat or manchild act nowadays. Always feel insecure and jealous and feel to the point you betray your own people who helped you and joint the enemy who kill your leaderr.. So what the problem if someone stronger than you? That's reason alone already show sasuke is arrogant spoilbrat already. If he cant resist curse seal effect? why anko can resists it? Why naruto who being treated like a trash for saving village from kyuubi, getting physically and mentally tortured by village from the moment he born, being tormented having kyuubi in his guts, being hated and spat by most village citizen the moment he just show his face yet can still resist negative path... This reason alone can justified naruto actions if he gone the wrong side since its his own village make him like that unlike sasuke who got everything, treat respect by village, got all teacher train him if he want yet betray because he can resist curse seal effect, and mostly because Itachi dismisses him for naruto. This also show you sasuke pride and arrogant is so damn high ...

Sasuke attack kage summit already wrong since if other kage which he fight got killed, he already put konoha in dipshit which he already got innocent citizens involve if other village declares war against konoha. What you think you invaded international diplomatic meeting and treat to kill leader is ok?

Uchiha clan in general is weakest in term of mentally. They can't move on or accept what destiny store for them either by their action or other way. Indra killing his supporters to gain power and feel angry/jealous because their daddy chose ashura instead of Indra, Obito see rin dead and take revenge on whole world, Madara got snapped because uchiha clan didn't support him which he intent to fight hashirama which lead another clan wars. Fugaku and uchiha clan got mistreat because of their ancestor action and yet they didn't even bother to correct mistake ... in fact they trying to create another war and they also hate minato for become fourth hokage. That why tobirama put uchiha as police since they can keep their emotion in balance.

I agree jiraiya is suck in term of godfather. But he already makes up his mistake by forming bond with naruto, teach naruto the important part of becoming ninja which influence naruto to create a better future..

Sasuke on the hand didn't bother about sakura feeling. So if sasuke scared to have daughter, why the fuck he married sakura in the first place? And then unintentionally abused sakura mentally to raise sarada alone for the whole of sarada childhood. You scared or whatever reason is not excuse to become a terrible father to sarada. How about sakura feelings ?For over 13 years without husband on your side and yet Naruto was the one who always by her side. How about sarada feelings? Her even jealous at boruto for having naruto as father. She even said new daddy would be nice...Sasuke still selfish manchild. Naruto even ask him to comeback yet he refused on his own. Naruto even before become hokage, he spend 24/7 with his family and even he become hokage, he still return to spend time with his family...

Look I'm not hate him but sometimes his action and attitude... well what do you expect from sasuke thenn...

Sasuke deserve bashing but not to some extent. Yes you have your brother kill your clan and parent, but you have whole konoha support you, all teachers want to teach you, with 6 years in canon gap,he pretty much can recover from that incidents. You forget that he betray the village,nearly get neji and choji kill,shoved naruto two chidori when in fact all naruto do persuade him to come back not to kill him.

Motivations? Thats doesn't mean he need to kill people for his own fxking goal. You join the enemy leader who recently kill you own leader. Betray your own village who support you. Attack kage summit who didn't do any bullshit to him. His doesn't have real motivation other than killing itachi. He mostly change side good to bad, bad to good. Want to destroy whole konoha who didnt do anything shit to your clan other than elders. Yeah good "Motivation"

Back story? He's coming from uchiha clan. He had memories with his family.

In fact your reasoning about sasuke shows you that you didn't watch the show clearly. He have WHOLE konoha support. Sasuke claims people didn't understand him yet he's the one who close his heart. Thats what naruto do. Trying to him be more open to people. He's the character that having weakest mentally. Easily to be manipulated. In fact all his reasoning"I have a bad childhood, i can do whatever i want"

Just because you have shitty childhood, its doesn't innocent people who doesn't have anything to you...

Amen, brother.

Considering Naruto had basically no help from any of his teachers and only a few hints at what to do(learning the rasengan, learning how wind release works, etc.), I'd say that they have more reason to have Naruto figure stuff out on his own compared to other characters.

I have some points to add -

01. Bad PairingsExample is Naruto and Tayuya. Naruto falls in love with someone who helped in assassination of your leader and grandfather figure.

02. Sasuke BashingSasuke's goal/motive was perfectly reasonable as was his behavior. If you were in his place, what would you do? Some fictions bash Sasuke because of his personality, etc.

03. HaremA harem ruins the story. Maximum pairing of two is good but more ruins the story. And many stories where Naruto met a woman and after spending some little time with her, they fall in love.

04. Banish FanficsA soldier/shinobi can never be banished. He/she can be retired, imprisoned, executed, and become a missing Nin. Even in the real world no country will banish their soldier. Even a army dog is killed after retirement so it will not come back to the base.

05. Naruto can deceive whole village by secretly training. Naruto can outrun an ANBU while pranking is bullshit.

06. Waiting for certain age to start ninja training. Original ninjas training started from birth. Till the age of 10, they were able to receive pain and not flinch, mimic various birds and animal sound, master all weapons, etc. What Masashi Kishimoto describes in Naruto is not real Ninja. A ninja never hesitates to take a life.

07. Naruto being as smart as an adult in his childhood.

08. Naruto informing the Hokage about Shadow Clone Jutsu and its use in paperwork. It is stupid and a Hokage not knowing that the Shadow Clone Jutsu can be used for office uses makes the Hokage stupid.