Great ending, well done!

Way to go Danny, Batman, their lawyer, and all who helped to bring the truth to light!

Great writing, you must have done a great amount of research to recreate such great court scenes together!

That was soooooooooo intense! Great work!

Oh boy, well when they get out of this I at least know Danny is ready to give Batman what he needs to take them down legally!

I have to admit I was a fan of the story until Danny's second pointless torture scene. you had Danny on the road to recovery which made for great character development and material. then he becomes tortured by Brain. which you then proceed to flush all the meaningful development down the drain. it felt like you added the torture scene just to pad out his recovery time like you realized that he was getting better to quickly for your atory., in which case you should of just adjusted the story for a more light hearted second half.

Another big thing were the plot holes that were never answered like what ended up happening to nocturne. but I think the thing that bothered me the most is I felt the team and heros in general were pretty useless throughout the story.

overall the first half your story was great but you suffered through the second half.

Fuck him. He should want revenge.

This was fun. Thank you for writing!

Now that the story is finished I want to say that it was great. It was an excellent exploration into Danny's character post kidnapping and a great way to show his recovery. It was also well written so much so that I didn't mind coming back every day for the next chapter. There are some things I would have changed like the team's mission to rescue Dick Grasyon as all honesty that did feel like it was a major nerf to what the characters are capable of realistically but otherwise I had no real issues.

This chapter confused me a bit with Danny’s “argument” with the Agents. In this universe wouldn’t Danny be considered a Metahuman? And I’m sure there’s a bill that would protect their rights, unless that hasn’t happened yet since this is between S1 and 2

make an sequel to this story cuase it is awesome and it deserves one too. like have it set like a year or two later some along the lines.

Won't the light try to come after Danny again or are you making a sequel about it?

Good story, I was thinking that Sam and Danny would have got together

I really liked this story. :) I’m a little upset its finally finished, but all stories have to end someday.

God damn this was such a satisfying story to read, kinda sad it's over now, but glad my boy got a happy and fulfilling ending. Good job on the story man.

good chap