| Reviews for The Journey of Souls |
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   Titanfall007 chapter 7 . 7/25 Well as you pmed me I took a look into your story. I must say I’m mighty pleased with it. I think it has a lot of potential, keep it up! |
| brambleus chapter 7 . 7/12 I feel like this story is turning into a dramatized version of the original Indra vs Ashura. Sasuke's gonna have his little kid possy and Naruto is gonna be friends with everyone else and then they'll fight. The only difference is that Sasuke never got the chance to befriend Naruto, he was corrupted early so there is no going back. |
| brambleus chapter 4 . 7/12 I get you're trying to base Kushina after real life circumstances but it just makes such an awesome character shallow. |
| brambleus chapter 3 . 7/12 Kushina being alive is stupid. She loved naruto too much to be dragged down by some shitty condition and ditch him. Its way too forced and doesn't make sense. In the manga when we see Kushina talk to Naruto through the seal she has no mental problems even though her chakra was directly from the attack. She's a goddamn shinobi not some weaklng. |
| Forever Filthy chapter 1 . 7/12 Aside from the grammatical issues, I enjoyed this chapter. Your narrative style fits Naruto very well. You've kept both Naruto and Hinata in character. I like the budding romance you've started building from an early age and him giving her the flower was a nice touch. Something very innocent and wholesome about it. Hehe, I'm a sucker for those nameless bullies and thugs types. They crack me up every time. |
| Shinobi420 chapter 1 . 7/9 This story is giving me "Avatar: The Last Airbender" vibes for some reason, especially with the whole past lives plot device. Reminds me when Aang had contact with his Avatar predecessors. |
| my 2 guys chapter 7 . 7/1 that was great keep the chapters coming |
| RelevantX chapter 6 . 6/30 Finally someone made the right choice about Itachi i was searching for a novel with that conclusion thanks for making that happens |
| bloodbrother 18 chapter 7 . 6/29 Wow lol hanabi found ich ich books lmao can't wait for more post soon. |
| MarTinez9 chapter 7 . 6/29 So will Naruto be adding two more girls to his harem. |
| Jashinrules chapter 7 . 6/27 nooo hanabi is to young lol |
| M2R chapter 5 . 6/27 hmm... i don't know about sasuke attitude before uchiha massacre. but I don't think he will be such a prick. i think he will be at least prideful but tolerable. he doesn't look down on people that much either... but hey, this is your fic and from what i can see many things are different already. |
| tsukasa30 chapter 7 . 6/27 HANABI IS CORRUPT no... Who will be responsible for this jiraya someone from hyuga clan. What will his mother said |
| GamerX568 chapter 7 . 6/27 I don't like your characterization of Sasuke, it's just too close to the Bashing Characterization of Sasuke for me to like. |
| Samthman chapter 7 . 6/27 Nice chapter keep up the good work |
