Reviews for Zero-One: The X Protocol
Gundam-Knight-Chris chapter 4 . 20h
You messed up on the preview. It should say 5TH Entry. It still has 4TH Entry on it.
Dragon Rider 66 chapter 4 . 7/24
hmm, interesting bit of HIDEN having a ship shooting out of ZEA just like the bike, although i question a bit on why it's themed after rising hopper instead of biting shark considering it's a water vehicle and stuff...

anyway, not too much i think i can really say here, but i loved those scenes with fuwa and kind of bonding with the other bots.

i also liked how you had horobi mention Ichi-Gata during that video clip and stuff. can't wait to see some more possible stuff related to that rider.

so next up, the manga, flaming tiger, and the shotgun. this is going to be lit.
ROCuevas chapter 4 . 7/24
Quite good work.
Lord Zero Master chapter 4 . 7/24
Haven't really commented prior to my brief one at the start but I'd just like to say that I am still absolutely enjoying this. Knowing about events and character stuff further down really just helps when coming up with more quirks for characters in earlier scenarios.

The comedy and character interactions are top notch so despite it following the story of Zero-One's first quarter, there's still things that make it fresh which I love.
TrimusicaDrag00n90 chapter 4 . 7/23
this rocks
TheNexusOfChaos chapter 3 . 6/12
Let me start by saying that Zero-One has become my favorite Kamen Rider alongside Forze, the fact that even before this story you and your friends have become some of my favorite authors on this site made me very excited, sadly this fanfic did not meet expectations. It destroyed them with a megaton bomb and I really hope that it doesn’t fall to the wayside because of your other stories. Like I said Autro is one of my favorite Riders and I really look forward to the new adventures and twist that will come from the MEGAMAN world.
ROCuevas chapter 3 . 5/21
Quite well done.
ForestHunter21 chapter 3 . 5/20
Horobi be acting like a responsible dad
Gundam-Knight-Chris chapter 3 . 5/19
Give Zero-One a Megaman X form. And a Zero form.
Dragon Rider 66 chapter 3 . 5/19
*sigh* and like that my dislike for yua has increased. seriously, that girl has poor judgment skills or something.

intersting way to show how megaman gets his new forms from those keys. I also liked how you had aruto show his hope for somehow a dino key, too bad the closest he'll get to that wish is with breaking mamoth later, hehehe.

intersting bit with roll having a different outfit and personality depending on the progrisekey, makes me curious what the other keys will be like; that and worry a bit if something similar will happen with metal cluster hopper before the hopper blade happens.

well that's really it this time. time to wait and see what happens next.

later.
fafnir1404 chapter 3 . 5/19
Nice chapter. And things are starting to pick up. Zero's schematics? Now I await how this will change things.
CrisisBorn chapter 2 . 5/7
This chapter was pretty good, great job man.

Kinda like to know what would happen if my oc reiwa kamen rider was in this story. I've been waiting to use him in story not my own.
LoamyCoffee chapter 2 . 5/6
Keep going, this is grand.
Pikatwig chapter 2 . 5/6
Compared to some of the other reviews, I honestly like this version of Roll. It's just funny to imagine these scenarios with her in Izu's position. Though, in all honesty, now I wonder how Wazu is going to be adapted. The only idea I have is that he'd be Rock, but that would be depressing given what happened to Wazu, so... we'll see.

Also, something I honestly remember, I recall hearing at least two fansub groups hate Aruto because of all the puns. This episode was one notable one with his pun ('shaine' and 'shine' for those who don't know) not translating well into English. Just something I kind of remember.

I will admit... I did not expect you guys to have any game Mavericks show up. That was a twist I didn't see coming since all of the Magia are based on extinct animals while only our heroes get animals that are alive today. Kudos. Though, gotta ask, is it going to be sticking to one particular game or are you going across the series? Just curious.

Overall, good job with this chapter. Though, given certain "revelations" (I put that in quotes because the guy who said it is a compulsive liar), I'm curious how you'll adapt things moving forward.
RedRat8 chapter 2 . 5/4
You know I was curious about how you intend to replace Izu, best robot girl ever, with Roll and I must say while it's a contrast for the two, Roll certainly does amuse me a lot, she plays the Straight person to the ridiculous gags around her which Aruto, Z, Aila, and RICO clearly play, I approve of this.
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