zouken matou in a pta meeting... I am very very worried

Great story so far. It's so difficult to find stories like this one that are actually good or still alive. When will Kariya and Aoi get involved? They can't sit around forever, and I can foresee that Hikaru will likely have to do what Kariya was unwilling to do, become a magus and redeem their lineage from Zouken's foul existence.

Good fic

I dont know why but I want Shirou to turn into a pseudo servent. Maybe its because basically every other pseudo servent body is there but I don't know. All I know is a large part of me wants Muramasa lol. Anyway good work on the story im liking it so far and can't wait to see where it goes next.

That's rather intriguing trivia about saunas, though you'd imagine they'd be more popular in Scandinavia, what with the cold. I'd imagine that, in Japan, they have hot springs instead, given how popular onsen are.

Anyway, good chapter. And I guess the moral of the story is, don't f*** with Valkolumi.

Actually, stupid questions, but is Valkolumi a canonical name for one of the Edelfelts? And if not, why did you choose that name? That name seems to evoke the word 'valkyrie'...which, as I come to write that, seems to mean something to my weird, meandering brain...I wonder if the Edelfelts were the remnants of a line that interbred with Valkyries left over after Ragnarok. Interesting fact for you if you didn't know: according to the Second Lostbelt of "Fate/Grand Order", Ragnarok actually happened in the Nasuverse, with the Aesir and the Giants wiping each other out and thus bringing to an end the Age of the Gods in Scandinavia. This happened approximately three thousand years ago.

Hmm...I wonder if the Edelfelts have Sigurd's glasses?

Ah, Caren, one of the biggest trolls of the Nasuverse...and she's clearly not only taken after dear old papa, but has surpassed him in being a troll. Now, let's see if Zelretch will make her his successor...

And doesn't Reines, also one of the biggest trolls in the Nasuverse, exist solely to troll poor Waver? The sad thing is...well, while I shouldn't spoil what happens exactly, she gets to play one hell of a card against poor Waver in one of the latest chapters of "From Fake Dreams" by Third Fang.

Actually, speaking of good Nasuverse fics, have you ever read "Chaos Theory" by Moczo? At one point, Kid Gil shows up, albeit with heavy elements of his Archer self...and it is hilarious! XD

oh man, I love this!

Cute story. What happen to luvia?

Fun so far. You know you should do a version of Magister faye’s Frozen memories. I think you could take that premise and make it fun. Or do a young Sakura summons a servant story and gets mad and her family. I really think you would do a good job with those premises.

Long time reader of your stories, I have my problems with them when it comes to characterization, repetition on themes or plot. But I always love your narrative and the originality you come with when it comes to new stories or ideas to explore. This story is one of your best from my point of view, hope to see more and thank you for your writing.

This story is very fascinating and unique. You just earned a new reader. I just hope you continue and finish this until the end. Too many great stories sometimes end up dead after all.

Oh, I love Kirei's last line. Seriously, the number of people who could drive him to drink could probably be counted on a single hand.

Now, Waver's aide...am I correct in believing that we will meet the very adorable Gray? Ooh...I know the Tohsakas want to dismantle the Grail War, but will Gray meet her ancestor?

Thank you for the chapter!

BTW, how old is Caren during the events of "Fate/Stay Night"? I'm guessing she's about 14-17 for "Hollow Ataraxia", but it's hard to tell...

I wonder if Hikaru did get the chance to call his parents since I want to see how Kariya being an parent here. This is truly a re-joyful moment for father and daughter to meet once againXD