i love this story so far! please keep writing it!

"Who knew human children could be so exhausting?" Welcome to parenthood, pal. Yeah, part of me expected the inevitable interaction between Thunder and Callum to end in a negative way,but I am glad it didn't end violently. Yes, Callum screamed at him ( he's well within his right to) and Thunder tolerated it; I'm surprised that Thunder didn't yell back or shoot lightning or even eat him. The worst thing was that he didn't really apologize for what he did to Sarai. Part of me hopes that he will give a genuine apology, but I'm not holding my breath on that.

I like Zubeia, not just because of Nicole Oliver, but how you've written her here. She did seem kind when she officially spoke in the season three finale,this story is expanding on that is very concerned about the happiness of the elves she's looking after, in spite of their different cultures amongst each other. Hard truth: Doing what's right for your citizens doesn't guarantee individual happiness. She does seem concerned for Callum's health, physical and mental. Loving this a lot.

-AngetianPrincess18

It's kinda cute that Callum was making chirp noises like a dragon, being around a dragon is
really affecting his behavior. Makes me wonder if Soren will call him "the real Dragon Prince" if this dragon like behavior will continue when he goes back to Katolis one of these days. Glad Rayla was in this chapter, she's playful and cute.

I love it please update

A very good story. Well-balanced balance of speed of narration. Not too fast when everything happens in too short a period of time. And not too slow. I like that all paragraphs are engaged in storytelling, and not how some write specially a lot of garbage text for volume.

Cool chapter hope you are staying safe and are able to upload the next chapter soon

interesting

When Soren and Claudia try to get the unicorn horn to forge the spirit that will kill the king of the dragons. I can see Callum Trying to stop them and save the unicorn . While he’s on a journey to the Silver Grove to learn the moon Arcanum once he’s mastered the sun in the sky primals.

I saw this recommended on TVTROPES and I finally got around to reading it. I greatly enjoyed it and could not wait for my break to read more of it

I love the idea and the writing! Great story 3

Toujours très bien, je suis impatient de savoir ce qu'Harrow va faire pour récupérer Callum et quelles en seront les conséquences. Je veux aussi voir comment va être Aravos avec Callum ?

The chapter went well with a slice of pie.

Awesome chapter! I'vr enjoyed all of it so far, thanks for writing.

Loving the story so far! It's unique and the writing itself is of high quality; has me hooked. I'm assuming that the expedition into Xadia Harrow ordered is going to be in place of the killing of the Magma Titan? I'm interested in what will follow, and how events will play out differently.

Huh, guess I was right about Callum's hair being on the scarf. I agree with your stance on Viren;the writers purposefully,in my opinion, made Viren a complex character mostly because supervillians have done to death and so we could better understand him and possibly empathize with him. Even the book novelization of the first season makes me empathize with him, especially after learning why his wife divorced him (which was selfish on her part,imo). Plus, Viren using the Titan's heart was essentially cleaning up Harrow's impulsive decision. Sarai didn't have to like Dark Magic, but at that point, it seemed like the only other option was to let 100,000 people starve to death and that probably would have destroyed Harrow's reputation and his kingdom's trust in him. Viren did what he had to to help the starving people and Claudia did what she had to help her brother in the second season. If she didn't,Ezran would've died. Am I condoning all of Viren's bad decisions? No. Do I think Dark Magic can be used for good? Yes, just not as a "one size fits all" solution.

The little game of tag that Sol played with Callum was Harrow doesn't misinterpret that. Also, I hope Amaya is okay. Maybe Janai will help find Callum if things work out
Keep up the good work
-AngetianPrincess18