Reviews for The Keyblade Wielder and the Mercenary (English Version)
Guest chapter 34 . 9/30
I have a few ideas for a keyblade for Edelgard.
Edelgard (Element form) combat involves the hyper hammer combat but with a few combat arts in the mix with some attacks dealing magic damage.
Level 1. Adrestian onslaught (hyper hammer with combat and magic surrounding Edelgard)
Level 2. Amyr EX (hyper hammer combat with references to axe combat arts along with Quick Slash with a bigger hit box, Radial Blaster and Last charge)
Finisher: Storm of the Eagle (Summons wings that are on fire similar to One Heart from the remind armored Xehanort fight with Kairi then rains Fire and Light from the sky, finishing with a sped up but more powerful version of Raging Storm clearing a huge area around her)
Shotlock: Level 1. Eagles Rampage (King of Hearts animation) Level 2. Black Eagle Blast (Infinity Circle animation)
Abilities: Crest of Flames: 50% chance to heal Edelgard relative to damage dealt when using finishers or combo finishers
Firaza: tier 4 fire magic
Crest of Serios: Increases chances for a critical hit (Since there aren’t any combat arts in kh I had to innovate)

Along with that she’ll also have a rage form like Sora but with her hegamon husk wings and as such she’ll have risk charge just like Sora but the finisher will be in reference to Return To Light during the final boss of KH3 and her combat will be a mix of Riku’s rising wing from Dream Drop Distance and Rage form.

I wanted to include this representing what would happen if you don’t side with her in the story of FE3H without her professors guidance.

I’m also planning on making a custom limit attack for Edelgard and Byleth but I’ll get to that during the next installment of the series.
keybladelight chapter 34 . 9/29
His three a chance that the story will go to kh memories of melody and his yozora will appear like in the dlc secret episode.
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 34 . 9/28
Excellent work! Ya did great on this! WHOO!
NinjaFang1331 chapter 34 . 9/28
Excellent update
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 33 . 9/21
NICE! Loving this! I’m looking forward to the conclusion (along with the battles) that will happen in The Battle of the Eagle and Lion!

By the way, I’m glad you approve of my idea! I also like how you chose Cloud and his friends from the Remake as the ones to represent the White Tigers! Although Cloud has a more lion-ish theme, the name of Lions already goes to the Blue Lions so Tigers is a very good alternative name!

I’m going to definitely check out Roxas’ adventures in KH: Shadows of Valentia! Also, what kind of Keyblade pose is Celica using? Something similar to Aqua’s? Or the same one she has in Echoes?
Guest chapter 33 . 9/21
Also since Celica has a keyblade, I was thinking about what other characters’ keyblade’s could be so this what I came up with for Byleth
Byleth: The key to the creator (Second Form B)
Increases damage dealt by physical and light based attacks (Same combat for light form except the keyblade will convert into a whip for attacks like quick slash or Zantetsuken)
Level 1. Enlightened Impact (inflicts blindness instead of stun)
Level 2. Sonic Flash (Sonic blade but with teleporting like light forms dodge roll)
Level 3. Progenitor God Ruptured Heaven (Pretty much her Final Smash covering a huge area in front of her)
Shotlock: Base: Blades of Sothis(Diamond Dust animation) Full: Light Divide(Like Riku’s Dark divide)
Abilities: Crest of Flames (50% to heal Byleth when she performs a combo finisher or a form finisher)
Sparkza: Grand Magic of Sparkga from Dream Drop Distance
Guest chapter 33 . 9/21
As soon as I learned that the white tigers were the FF7 cast I got chills when I realized most of them would end up being nobodies, I really liked how you did that but if they’re in Fodlan then wouldn’t that imply that Sephiroth is here too considering what happened in Kh2?
TheCalamityCoyote chapter 33 . 9/20
What a chapter! I love the idea of Celica being a Keyblade Wielder. It makes so much sense! I'm kinda intersted to see how a Roxas/Celica side ship story would act out. Honestly those 2 have potential. Overall, very hyped to see this story continue.
Raximus chapter 3 . 9/20
Sora has fought humans before, KH may have limited violence but that does not mean its characters are not capable of killing people, they just don't have to.
NinjaFang1331 chapter 33 . 9/19
Excellent work and now onto the battle
Dcraus chapter 1 . 9/19
Riku in Fire Emblem Awakening
Ventus in Fire Emblem Fates
Guest chapter 32 . 9/18
I really liked the update but right now I have a bad feeling that the white tigers are gonna end up being Nobodies led by Young Xehanort or someone else with the organization. Also I had a thought of what Sora’s wartime attire could look like, a mix between KHDDD attire with KH3 Attire but instead of the Xehanort sigil of the DDD attire, it’d be Male Byleth’s logo on his shirt or the Adrestian Emblem.
NinjaFang1331 chapter 32 . 9/15
Excellent update thank you
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 32 . 9/15
Excellent work! And omg! You didn’t!? YOU DID! Celica is the mystery FE GIRL?! Awesome! Good choice! It’s definitely nice to see her paired with another person besides Alm! Not that I don’t like the guy. I just like variety with certain pairings! Lol.

Anyway, looking forward to what kinds of interesting things not only Sora and co will go through, but Roxas, Celica, and possibly any other people they may encounter for their group as well!

Anyway, I had a couple ideas to run by ya. I was curious, what if Jeralt were to become a Nobody down the line? I thought of the idea when he mentioned how one of the knights turned into a Heartless. No doubt Jeralt IS of a string will, so it’s possible he could become a Nobody if his heart was taken by a Heartless.

The other idea was Monica/Kronya. I was wondering if it MAY be possible for her to gain a second chance? After all, I’m sure Sora would be able to make a change in her, causing her to doubt her goals. And let’s not even forget how she is betrayed later on by her supposed allies. I know she was responsible for Byleth’s loss, but when she was betrayed by Solon, I could only feel pity for her as the roles between prey and predator were switched. Who knows? Maybe Roxas and Celica could find her and have her as a useful spy/scout? Just some ideas I wanted to give ya to think about. Please let me know your thoughts!
ramirezhuizar00 chapter 32 . 9/14
You already got me curious about Roxas adventure now. I so want know what Happened those past few days in Valentia.
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