Reviews for The Guardian Chronicles: Divulgence
harlequin320 chapter 27 . 7/20
interesting chapter, keep up the good work
StrongGuy159 chapter 27 . 7/19
Cool chapter continue please.
AnimeandFanficLover chapter 27 . 7/19
Good chapter. Always love Naruto's interactions with her female classmates, and how she always compares it to her interactions with her female classmates in the Academy. Shows that not all young girls are shallow bitches. Just love comparing the immaturity of Sakura, Ino, and the rest of the girls Naruto knows in Konoha (minus Hinata) vs. the maturity of Yaoyorozu, Uraraka, and the others.

Speaking of that, how far has Hinata and Kiba gotten in their relationship? Has she confessed? Are they dating yet? I'm curious.
anime-obsessed-1-7 chapter 27 . 7/19
Flashbacks would be very appreciated! I feel like they give a lot of insight on the relationship between two characters and clarify why they act a certain way around each other. Great chapter, keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 27 . 7/19
Technically, Minato didn’t murder Isamu’s mother, it was a war after all!
Guest chapter 27 . 7/19
What does All For One get from his Alliance with Orochimaru!? Who is the student that Orochimaru wants!?
Guest chapter 27 . 7/19
I find it ironical that the girls are telling Naruto she should avoid getting scars. I mean they are all training to become heroes and they will get scars at some point in their careers, they should hope that they get someone who doesn't care if they ended with scars or not.
I thought the talk with Kouta's aunt was a good one and that having her talk about it in a point of view without giving out that she as well is an orphan makes it even better.
Thank you for the update and I cant wait to see what happens next!
Engineer4Ever chapter 27 . 7/19
personally, I can see Naru getting the upper hand and taking down Isamu through some trickery. I think he's too used to resting on his laurels since his exile. He just feels like he's hyped up but will go out like a candle.
Amaterasu53 chapter 26 . 7/18
I like the way things are progressing - finally! And I'm also excited that a Konoha team is going to see her. It's also great that Hinata told off Tsunade about her apprentice; I had wondered if Tsunade was aware of how awful Sakura is. It was also good to hear that the rest of the boys there were worried about Naruto, now knew of her clan at least - although I wonder when they'll learn of her father, (and that she's a princess.)
Chris-Tina chapter 1 . 7/18
She just keep swimming ur getting there girl
Raphtalia Joestar chapter 26 . 7/17
How didn't they notice the scar? Great chapter though.
Guest chapter 26 . 7/17
I wonder how nobody noticed the chidori scar on her chest.
The development of Naru's and Shoto's relationship is going really well
GamerX568 chapter 26 . 7/17
Great Chapter and I think that Hinata would love that Naruto is dating someone. I also feel like Hinata would be kind of protective of Naruto.
AnimeandFanficLover chapter 26 . 7/17
Another great chapter! Can wait for Hinata and Naruto to meet up? I think Hinata would be happy for Naruto. She finally found someone who genuinely loves her for HER. They aren't trying to manipulate her for their own selfish desires like Team 7.

Though this part pertains more to the last chapter than this way. I just forgot to say it. The way Naruto talks to Kouta, it's almost like she's throwing the same words Sasuke threw at her to someone else. The whole "they may be orphans suffering from loneliness, but doesn't mean they can understand each other on the same level because their reasons of being an orphan are different" excuse. These are the words Sasuke threw are Naruto when he yelled at her for not understanding the loss of a family. It made me wonder if the reason Naruto is being EXTRA aggressive with Kouta is because he reminds her of Sasuke, and is- subconsciously- taking her pent up resentment and anger on the boy. Because her whole ordeal with Kouta just screams "I'm still bitter about Sasuke (rightly so), so I'm gonna take it out on you. Deal with it!" vibe. I don't know. It's just her choice of words are VERY reminiscent of what Sasuke screamed at her.

Is Hinata gonna have any parting words to the rest of Konoha 11? I want to see how they would take the news of Hinata leaving to Japan. Gives more of an insight on how everyone's taking Naruto's absent. See who really misses her and who doesn't. Tell friends from shallow bitches. And I'm curious to see how the economy is effecting them after the Uzumaki clan took their money back.

Anyway, great chapter! Looking forward to the next one!
Phoenixmoon191 chapter 26 . 7/17
Probably do her best mama lion impression and then talk to him.
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