I love this story the pace , the character development is really good and great fight scenes.i don't know if there's anything you have to get better at so just keep up how it is.

great chapter, keep up the good work

Damn this update was really good

Ducking amazing

Wait, I thought Naruto was already AWARE of the memory transfer ability of the Shadow Clone Technique!? Doesn’t she already utilize that aspect to accelerate her training since she spent over Two and A Half YEARS wasting time, thus needing to catch up with all her old comrades!?

this was so cool! I cant wait for more

OMG! This is the best chapter yet! So much finally came out - and I can't wait for more! Great, great writing. And yes, they are all screwed! Where the hell is Jiriaya when you need him? You'd think the sealmaster would have put a seal on her or something, right? Or that Uzumaki guy? Maybe after this... Damn!

Cool chapter continue please.

Was Aizawa referring to Hibiki, Naruto, and Jiraiya as the ones to be brought in for questioning!?

You forgot to have Hibiki mention to Aizawa that Monoma is one of the targets on the Kidnapping List!

Its great

Who was the dead person that Tsunade said could understand what Naruto was feeling!?

Please update soon!

Great chapter
I rally would like to see sasuke and naruto meet once again

Remember when canon naruto fought orochimaru in four tails? That's what i imagined this naruto will fight kabuto, like, how awesome the fight's gonna be?
If she went out of control with the kyuubi chakra, then i'm sure hibiki's the one to calm her down