Reviews for Heroes Unite
Blobking chapter 10 . 10h
that when will or being ass the the fantice four being shit or something
Bartman chapter 7 . 12h
"Are you shy with the girls? You realize you're the only dude on this team, right?"

Ironic.
Bartman chapter 6 . 12h
SHIELD is cool.

Wolverine vs Omega Red? A classic.
Bartman chapter 2 . 13h
Kara vs Diana. Who would win?
Cloud4012 chapter 10 . 7/23
That was amazing. I loved all the characters you brought in
qazse chapter 10 . 7/23
Yet another example that Doom isn’t a villain. Just a megalomaniac that makes hard choices that actually are “for the greater good”. To bad every narrow minded hero can’t look past his massive ego to see that.
Omni-Creator Kami of Anime chapter 10 . 7/23
This is arguably the most comical chapter of Marvel i've ever seen, but oddly enough i can actually see this happening in the DC super Hero Girls shows if Marvel were actually integrated into it, given how comical and crazy the show is.
And for "Marvel's first Superhero family", the Fantastic 4 really were idiots in this story, given that Sovereign rulers (including dictators) usually have Diplomatic immunity even without any sort of dealing with SHIELD.
Word of advice: also be careful of how many adult superheroes are in your story, both in regards to DC AND Marvel superheroes.
As per DC Super Hero Girls, almost all major DC characters (hero and villain alike) are either teenagers or kids, barring certain exceptions like Batman and Superman.
Same will likely apply to most Marvel heroes in your story (barring certain exceptions like Iron Man, Captain America, Thor, Wolverine, and Hulk).
I can totally see Spider-Man, Carol Danvers/Captain Marvel, most of the X-Men etc as teenagers in your story.
John2851 chapter 10 . 7/23
It is nice to see Andre put his mind at work before action. Plus, Dr. Doom something else. Great work.
Jaguarian76 chapter 10 . 7/23
It's really funny to read how Doom was right in a sense, also it's good to know that Andre thinks before acting,
It was a great chapter, it also made me thinks of thé trope reed Richard is useless
Omni-Creator Kami of Anime chapter 9 . 7/21
This story feels like “DC Superhero Girls: Plus Ultra”, except being T-rated and therefore seems unlikely to have any lemons, along with the obvious fact that it has Marvel instead of My Hero Academia.
It’s not bad, per say, but the dialogue and world-building could use a little work.
Also, given that this story is a mix of DC and Marvel, I honestly would’ve had the best bombshells of both franchises in the harem, comprised of not only the DC Super Hero Girls, but a few extras, like Jean Grey, Scarlet Witch (the magic Mutant one, not the MCU knockoff), Black Cat, etc.

Regarding Andre’s powers, I honestly think you should give Andre some MAJOR powers.
Like a Wolverine/Deadpool level healing factor, a precognitive danger sense akin to Spider-Man’s “Spider-Sense”, Superhuman strength, speed, endurance, and Reality-Warping (DC and Marvel desperately need a few more heroes with Reality-Warping capabilities).

Please update soon!
John2851 chapter 9 . 7/21
Awesome!. This is the best thing that I was hoping to see. I sure hope that Andre have romantic feelings for the girls. My top list that he should totally ask to be his girlfriend.

1. Kara

2. Barbara

3. Diana

And

4. Jessica.

Can not wait for the next one buddy!.
Blobking chapter 9 . 7/21
hope the next one be good.
qazse chapter 9 . 7/21
As clingy as Carol is, she can do better. Cause if a guy can’t break up with you face to face like a man, and does it through text messages, he was never worth your time.

Also as admirable it is that Jessica stood for her beliefs. She’s gonna learn the hard way that when dealing with supervillains, especially killers, violence IS the only option.
Shadow Joestar chapter 9 . 7/21
KO awesome chapter, Andre may like Jessica’s peaceful way but even he must know that there are times when she will have to throw a punch or two to save the day and it looks like he has won her heart as well.
Jaguarian76 chapter 9 . 7/21
It's true that killowog cares about his trainees, also I thought that André had the same bad experience that Ray got when he went hunting
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