damn!, didn't see that coming at all. Zoe didn't get her revenge. this story and chapter is gripping leaving me wanting more.

I thought all the good ideas for Fire fanfic had been exhausted, and then here you come. I am actually anxiously awaiting new chapters! Good job in every way!

Great chapters! Glad the baby was finally born.

Well, that chapter was appropriately sad. Zoe reacted about how I expected she would.

Great chapter! I love the idea that you're basing the story around Zoe's grief. Also in this chapter, Zoe is obviously in denial about more than one subject. So that works for this story.

Great first chapter! Major General Whedon? Nice reference. Yeah, I think the Alliance are going to have a tougher time of covering up the truth than they realize just yet.