Reviews for Star Wars: Total Submission
1saaa chapter 12 . 7/23
Well played. I especially liked the way padme looked at the mirror. You did a good job on this.
1saaa chapter 11 . 7/20
Nice, you're doing padmes descent great justice.
1saaa chapter 9 . 7/11
Good job. Looking forward to the next one
1saaa chapter 8 . 7/8
We've talked about this scene and you did not dissapoint. Good job!
1saaa chapter 7 . 7/4
Hello hello. I have returned from my slumber.

Another solid chapter.
1saaa chapter 5 . 6/12
I like how you are planting one seed after another. Looking forward to the next one.
1saaa chapter 4 . 6/5
Nice nice. The key to this story will be to strip padme down to nothingness until all she has left is the empire.
1saaa chapter 2 . 5/25
Terrifyingly dark but at the same time it's been what you've been building up to.

I think you've done a good job on this chapter
1saaa chapter 1 . 5/23
What a lovely introduction. Padme is well...

Damn she's screwed. Sorry for going silent on you for so long. But, I'm back now.

Looking forward to the next one.