Reviews for Something Immortal
MarilynKC chapter 56 . 2h
Perfect ending to a story filled with emotion and love. Thank you.
Guest chapter 56 . 7h
Very sweet ending for all. Glad Jules got his boys back and remarried. Wish Erik and Christine would have had their own child and given Gustave a sibling-only thing I didnt like about story. But other than that, it was a sweet story with lots of love and acceptance.
MyFictionalDarlings chapter 56 . 8h
Aww, how very sweet to get to see things from young Gustave’s point of view!
Thanks for all the effort you put into your story— it was so fun to read such regular updates! Really brightened many days for me! Keep up the good work!
Lunashine chapter 56 . 9h
I love this ending! Perfect!
Lunashine chapter 55 . 11h
Awwww. I love it!
Badpixie06 chapter 55 . 16h
Nice ending with both Erik and Christine happy and looking to a wonderful future as a family. Looking forward to the epilogue x
Guest chapter 55 . 16h
That was the most beautiful chapter in this entire story. Erik's thoughts all the way through ch. 55 were so sweet and full of love and adoration for Christine. Her thoughts were beautiful. But Erik had never known love but he knew in ch. 1 the had to help this girl. Despite the hurt and heartache he experienced growing up, his act of kindness turned into a happily ever. He didnt know then (nor she) that they were each others angel. I like all your stories but this one is my favorite. I'm going to miss it at the end. Maybe you could write a little add-on later to it-maybe when Gustave is a little older and they have another baby. I like Rose Among Thorns and A Peculiar Peace, but this was a beautiful story with a beautiful heart from beginning to end. Job well done!
MarilynKC chapter 55 . 16h
Very satisfying ending - AND we get an epilogue! Most enjoyable story, glad to have come along for the ride.
smrb chapter 55 . 16h
So so pleased there will be an epilogue but what a lovely end to the story. Makes you feel all warm and fuzzy inside haha
Aphaea21 chapter 55 . 17h
Aww! so sweet! Love this E and C. More adventures for them please! :) x
Feather Headed Feline chapter 55 . 19h
MY BABIES ARE HAPPY Q.Q
Lucyole chapter 54 . 7/27
Really sweet chapter, Iike it. Now the number one goal for Christine is to bring some fat onto Erik's bones and shower him with love and affection. More please *cookies for inspiration and the great work*
Mominator124 chapter 54 . 7/27
"I'm *not* impulsive. I just . . . make decisions quickly." Rotflmao! I absolutely *adore* this line. XD

And thank you for a first time that was so quick for a man who was inexperienced and had not built up any endurance. It's so nice to see a bit of realism, as opposed to all the unrealistic, perfect first encounters so prevalent in fanfic.

Hungry Gustave was a nice touch, too. XD

Found a couple of potential errors:

". . . gripping the handle of a yellow-lit dark (steel?) lantern.

". . . he hitched the skirt of my (nightgown? Nightdress?) up . . ." (since one would assume Christine sleeps in nightclothes of some kind and not a dress.)

Barb
Lunashine chapter 54 . 7/27
Aw, this was sweet.
Badpixie06 chapter 54 . 7/27
Erik finally gets to feel “ the joys of the flesh” and I am sure he is going to be spending quite a bit of time getting to know Christine post wedding, Gustave allowing!
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