Reviews for Malice
Cat on the table chapter 17 . 7/23
ohhh my god yao. sometimes you are just so dramatic. anyways, can’t wait to read what happens next, you’re doing great!
Ilich chapter 16 . 7/20
Oh my god!
I have to admit that Arthur's answers were strange, and well stalking doesn't seem right either
Yao's personal life is getting on the way of the investigation too and Ivan is just so clueless about it
I kind of feel bad for Arthur
Cat on the table chapter 15 . 7/18
Eyyy I recognized the Hamilton reference, nice. The suspense is killing me! And I am really impressed at the rate you’re publishing the chapters, great job!
Ilich chapter 14 . 7/16
Yesss, new chapter!
I like how you are introducing the characters, and those memories give an insight of their family dynamics, nice! Though it is a bit bitter, knowing that Michelle is dead
Daggerfruit chapter 1 . 7/16
Lovely. Simply lovely.
Ilich chapter 13 . 7/15
Nooo poor Michelle!
Interesting to give Francis multiple wives instead of a bunch of adopted children
The ending, gosh, Yao needs to get his thoughts together
Guest chapter 12 . 7/14
noooo not Seychelles! Ahhh this is so good— I like how we find out who people are one by one, and how they are connected with another, like the dance scene
Guest chapter 9 . 7/14
Oh my god Yao you temperamental little shit.
Ilich chapter 10 . 7/9
Gosh the frustration is real! Just aa them, I have no clue of who could it be.
I wonder who was Yao's partner
I really like the theme for that restaurant and it somehow fits so well in this story, like it makes me think of those black and white detective movies
And I wasn't expecting Yao to be so eager to dance but I'm totally digging it!
Bi.tan chapter 9 . 7/8
Damn if this is getting really interesting!
You must love clif hangers... you’re killing me slowly with those ...
The futher into the story the more complex it gets, i’m Pleasantly surprised with how this is progressing, up to now i’m Just as confused as our detectives no clue who is the culprit.
That scene with Berwald ... it was hilarius ! Same with Lovino, amazing entrance, also interrogations with your lover practically naked on your lap ... shit if that’s an interesting situation
Loved the backstory between antonio and Lovino, only that girl could be so kind after finding out.
Again amazing work, i can not wait for more! Why must you end each chapter on suspense? ... thanks for your work happily awaiting the next chap
Ilich chapter 9 . 7/7
I love how Natalya is all rational, and gosh the frustration was real haha I kind of get Yao, haha Ivan sharing about his family but being ashamed of his pet name is so cute!
And Omg what's with that cut, really weird.
I wonder if they found the ring
Nice chapters!
Bi.tan chapter 3 . 7/7
Interesting story so far funny to see such a dinâmica between Yao and Ivan.
That scene with lily was just ... incredible! Damn if she’s badass! I actually question at first to whom that comment about protecting was directed to since Yao had just spoke of protecting her still hilarious to see Ivan scared of a little girl on her play room, yes a interrogation scene set on a tea party toy rom is amazing!
That ending line is perfect! I must say antonio reaction seemed to over the top kinda of fake exaggeration so no surprise shit didn’t match up, still idk if i believe he was the culprit i think he was envolved but not alone.
Am i the only one that sees the gift thing as a sign of him apologizing for not giving her attention, to distract her cause he’s cheating?
All and all good job, intriguing and somewhat realistic, yes i loved Yao refusal at first and ludwig’s Reaction, thanks for writting!
WinterdaySmoothie chapter 7 . 7/5
Heyy thanks for commenting, I did check my pms but there's nothing there oop
emma.likes.to.write chapter 7 . 7/4
Ivan eating the cake is such a mood lol. Also, I love how you end each chapter with a piece of dialogue that's a cliffhanger!
(P.S. please check your PMs!)
Ilich chapter 7 . 7/3
I really like how you portrait Feliks and his train of thought.
That small moment of bonding in the car though, I wonder what happened to Yao's partner...
Yay, Tino appeared! I'm looking forward to see how it goes!
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