Reviews for The Golden Fairy: Remastered
Warmachine375 chapter 1 . 7/24
Well, the remastered version of The Golden Fairy looks pretty interesting at the start of the story and it's refreshing to read compared to the previous one. Of course, since you said Edens Zero got you fired up again to do this story back from the beginning, perhaps you can add in some of Mashima's works like Rave Master and Edens Zero for example here on this story since you did add some crossover elements back in the old The Golden Fairy if you remember. Like you can make Demon King Ziggy and his Four Shining Stars and Four Dark Stars as Machias from Edens Zero for example. In case you are wondering, Machias are a race of sentient machines that can use Magic on Earth Land and Wahl Icht of the Spriggan 12 was a Machias in the Alvarez Empire arc.

Even the Machina Maker power of young Weisz Steiner reminds me of Jenny Realight's Take Over Machina Soul and it's quite similar in more ways than one. Say, can she be a part of Goku's harem too as well? I mean it would be cool to see her have some major spotlight in this story and she could take interest on the Capsule Corp tech from Goku as she might be a girl genius model with mechanical engineering skills to create and utilize her Machina Soul after all.

I have a feeling Mashima foreshadowed the prominence of Machines in Edens Zero through Wahl Icht of the Spriggan 12 which is kinda surprising and mind blowing. It would be interesting to see how Goku react to a race of magical machines and want to test his strength against them, and also he get some de ja vu from the Androids back on Universe 7.

One thing for sure Goku is gonna be fighting on his base form which ain't gonna be a problem for him since he wanted to hold back a little and see what his new enemies on Earth Land can do and not show his Super Saiyan forms unless there is a really powerful enemy who can make him use it as a last resort. I mean he could easily Zeref and Acnologia if he wanted to, and he does not use Magic at all. Acnologia cannot eat Ki which would be his downfall and Zeref would gladly accept death from a Super Saiyan God who destroys his immortal curse effortlessly.

I see that Lucy is gonna be part of Goku's harem huh? Well, I have reservations regarding harem stories here but I would like to see how it develops and that Goku trains Lucy how to fight and grow stronger and skilled under his tutelage. I mean if he wants to train Natsu then he can train Lucy too as well and Lucy can pull her own weight to fight for her friends and kick ass enemy butt.

If Goku does join Fairy Tail, I do hope that not everything should be a rehash as Stations of the Canon. I mean what's the point of a crossover if there are some ripples of change caused by Goku from Universe 7 after arriving on Earth Land of Universe 6? It would be boring if we read the same thing we knew from canon with just Goku added in.

By the way, the killing of Dark Mages has never been forbidden. That's just a moral rule that Fairy Tail Mages have. There have been plenty of times Light Mages have killed people from Dark Guilds without punishment. For example: Erza killing Ikaruga, Laxus killing Wahl Icht and Minerva killing Kyouka.

So Goku would legally be able to kill Dark Mages without repercussion and even he would know to permanently stop the threat before they become a nuisance in the future.

Please make the Rune Knights to be as strong as they're supposed to be and give them justice for the huge disservice that Hiro Mashima had portrayed them as weak, incompetent, and virtually useless as cannon fodder and cartoony guards.

I have this idea of mine for the ranking system of the Rune Knights for the Adaptational Badass dose big time on them from the bottom to the top of the chain of command if you're interested of course for this story:
1. Cadet
2. Regular
3. Lieutenant
4. Captain
5. Major
6. Field Commander
7. Colonel
8. Division Commander
9. Major General
10. Lieutenant General
11. General
12. Minister General
13. Grand General
14. Supreme Commander

What do you think in your thoughts and opinions about the Rune Knight ranking?

To describe about these Rune Knight rankings:
1. The Supreme Commander is the highest rank within the entirety of Ishgar's Rune Knights, who commands all the Rune Knights in the continent and possesses the strength on par with that of Fiore's highest ranked Wizard Saint and Ishgar's strongest Mage but is subservient to the Chairman of the Magic Council.

2. The Grand General is the leader of a country's Rune Knights and is on a level of a 5th Wizard Saint. Supported by four Generals who are direct subordinates to him/her when it comes to leading their forces in battle. And is also considered to be second-in-command of the Supreme Commander who takes charge by himself/herself after arriving from Pergrande Kingdom, the largest and most powerful country of Ishgar.

3. The Generals are the top ranking officers of the Rune Knights and the chosen 4 who answer to the Grand General and the Supreme Commander too as well and are as strong as a Wizard Saint. Sometimes they take in apprentices who are Lieutenant Generals whose respective level of power are that of Guild Aces in grooming and training them as their potential successors in the future.

4. The Major Generals are the direct subordinates of the Lieutenant Generals and are somewhat considered the middle-men of the Rune Knight chain of command and they are considered to be on an S-Class level.

5. The Minister General is the one who usually takes care of the internal and external affairs of the Rune Knights, usually involves politics and public relations that does not require a lot of power in such rank while the Generals lead the fighting, yet is stronger than the current four Generals. Usually reserved for veteran Rune Knights or former Councilors with military background.

6. As for the rest of the other ranks: Division Commander, Colonel and Field Commander, they control the divisions and battalions as they personally lead them in the front lines and are on the mid-tier class of power compared with seasoned Guild Mages.

7. And the Major, Captain, and Lieutenant, they command the squadrons and teams of Regulars and Cadets who are the weakest of the Rune Knights all like scrubs they are and needed more training, and three high ranks in the lower chain of command of them have a moderately strong level in their own right compared to experienced Guild Mages.

On the bright side, some of the high-ranking Rune Knights can be allowed to customize their officer's uniforms with their own fashion preferences along with their own custom weaponry and equipment that stands them out from the lower ranks in the chain of command (whose canon Rune Knight rank and file uniform with staves looks so boring and uninspiring, and needs to be replaced with replacement of something more practical yet formal and militaristic uniform and equipped with actual standard weaponry but the staves can stay though) and be recognized and distinguished so long they follow strict uniform code and protocol including the addition of the Council colors and ankh emblem in their uniform; be it blue and white; and black and white.

The canon Rune Knight officer's uniform worn by Lahar and Doranbolt, and the other Rune Knight officer's uniform worn by Gajeel, Levy, and Pantherlily during their time at the Wizard Saint-run Council for one year are still cool and can stay as standard uniforms for the Rune Knight officers in the Council military with some little modifications and additions into them if they wanted to.

Remember the MPF event of the Grand Magic Games arc and Lahar, who was a guest commentator, stated that Millianna's MPF level is high enough to get a position of Captain in the Rune Knights after she struck the Magic Power Finder device as first contender.

So I got this in accordance to their Magic Power Finder or MPF rankings if these people were in the Rune Knights:
1. Millianna: 365 - Captain
2. Nobarly: 124 - Lieutenant
3. Hibiki: 95 - Regular
4. Obra: 4 - Barely even qualified as a Cadet
5. Orga: 3,825 - Field Commander
6. Jura: 8,544 - Lieutenant General
7. Cana: 9,999 - General (even though she did it through Mavis lending her Fairy Glitter just to get a cheap win the event)

In this chart, these are the MPF Levels for the Rune Knight rankings:
10 - 50: Cadet
51 - 100: Regular
101 - 350: Lieutenant
351 - 1,000: Captain
1,001 - 3,000: Major
3,001 - 4,000: Field Commander
4,001 - 5,000: Colonel
5,001 - 6,000: Division Commander
6,001 - 7,000: Major General
7,001 - 9,000: Lieutenant General
9,001 - 12,000: General
18,000: Minister General
24,000: Grand General
30,000: Supreme Commander

What do you think of the MPF Levels in your thoughts and opinion? Goku might get some flashbacks regarding Power Levels and Scouters back in Universe 7 and it feels nostalgic for him. Of course the MPF Device reads 0 Magic from Goku who uses Ki while the Earth Land students he trained them how to use Ki and increase their overall Magical abilities, it will over 9000. :)

After all, I always wanted to see Lahar in real action with actual Magic and combat skills he displays instead of just standing there and commanding the troops in the canon. Heck, even Doranbolt can kick serious butt as a Rune Knight in canon.

Anyways, this is a really cool DBZ x Fairy Tail crossover fic and I will be looking forward for the next chapter. Faved and Followed. :D
naruto chapter 1 . 7/21
great chapter keep it up
Guest chapter 1 . 7/20
Please add Irene Belserion to the harem
Sung Jin-Woo chapter 1 . 7/18
Buena historia pero te recomiendo que no agregues personajes de otros anime, ya que la anterior versión era muy confuso tanto que era muy complicado de comprender al ser un megamulticrossover.
Dbz fan chapter 1 . 7/18
Thank u for adding Lucy to being one of the girls for Goku I was hoping she would end up with him since she's never really been paired with him before in this kind of cross over and I read all the chapters from the original version of this story and wondered when it might get updated because that story really had my interest and was the first DBZ x fairy tail story I read and it was really good but seeing this version I know will be even better and if u plan to add more girls with Goku add princess hisui mirajanne eraza and lisanna look forward to the next chapter hopefully it will come soon because of how long we had to wait just for this and find out why the original story never got updated till now
wweTheBeast2015 chapter 1 . 7/17
A very long time man and happy you're back and good to see a new and improved the golden fairy the remastered and it's fired me up for more chapters.

Loving how new and different from the original of this story and power balancing with baby to super 17 power that of goku he achieved.
Thumbs up to Lucy in Goku harem also.

Well like anakin Skywalker would say This Is Where Begins.
twisterwave1999966 chapter 1 . 7/17
Whoa happy this story back and your back too and loving changes and Lucy being in goku harem is awesome to see.
Add Jenny to goku harem too and along with lucy also and pretty much similar harem girl's to goku harem.

Update soon and very excited for this story.
JLyman chapter 1 . 7/17
I like the changes you set in stone for this remastered story so far, especially how more balanced the power levels are, and I look forward to seeing more.

However, there is one major problem that I have with your writing. You tend to overdue details on current and past events, as well as dialogue. If you can cut some of that, then this first chapter would’ve been smoothed out more.

I’m not saying you’re a bad writer. You’ve got the skills to become a great storyteller and have a lot of potential to make this remaster better than the original. But with the suggestions I mentioned above, you can improve your writing skills even more.

Until next time,
JLyman
Mrpopo97 chapter 1 . 7/17
Am beyond happy to see you bringing this story back. Pretty sure this was the first story I read on discovering thos site.
El guerrero Goku chapter 1 . 7/17
interesting an improved version, I hope you can follow it at least until the alvarez arc
fpinheiro96 chapter 1 . 7/17
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!
DrifterDude2008 chapter 1 . 7/17
Whoa this story has return and I read the older one but you're new one rocks dude and keep it coming.
supersaiyanman290 chapter 1 . 7/17
Excellent
tblake426 chapter 1 . 7/17
This story is my favorite and keep it up.
superzfan58 chapter 1 . 7/17
Incredible story and loving harem stories and even this one and fine with me with Lucy in goku harem.

Great story and effort and be safe friend and God bless you.

Until next time on the next chapter then.
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