| Reviews for When A Heart Breaks |
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   augus10 chapter 2 . 6h Heartbreaking intense. Loved it. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 15h Awesome. More please. |
| Patty chapter 3 . 15h Great chapter. So emotional. Keep posting will you. |
| TARA chapter 3 . 15h This chapter brought tears to my eyes. I loved it. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 16h I love Jay and Lilly in this story! And this is so sweet can’t wait for the next chapter! |
| yournameisyours chapter 3 . 21h I feel really bad for jay, i hope to see more relax/happy jay... I really love this story and can't wait for jay lilly and hailey moment! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 21h Amazing. More please. |
| TARA chapter 2 . 21h When a heart breaks. Jay's certainly did. Great chapter. |
| Patty chapter 2 . 21h Another great, but sad chapter. I really felt so sorry for them. Still I'm enjoying it a lot. |
| nonna99 chapter 2 . 21h Great update. Sad, but I still loved it. |
| Margie chapter 2 . 7/21 Great chapter, quite emotional. Loved it. |
| Lauren chapter 2 . 7/21 This is so sad. Great chapter. Loved it. |
| JONI chapter 2 . 7/21 I felt so sorry for Jay. Glad Will's around. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/21 Keeps getting better and better! This chapter was really moving, can’t wait for the next one |
| Rvb92 chapter 3 . 7/21 Apologies if I'm not going to review every single chapter, but this story is an emotional Rollercoaster and I just can't. Lol Let's start from the beginning. The pain. The pain both jay and his daughter are feeling is just heartbreaking, and it brings out all the flaws and problems of jay in particular. Losing the person he loved is no joke, add a daughter to the mix and the disaster is waiting to happen. He's trying to be strong for the girl, but it's not easy. And keeping it all inside won't help him. I hope Hailey will be the person to bring them a little bit of light in their life and maybe a future of happiness. |
