Wow! I'm impressed you changed the outcome of the trial! Clever. But also, this is taking me back to that Christmas back when I was in middle school and had just put Super Mario Sunshine into my Game Cube after unwrapping it. Keep up the good work, Fairy!

Five days? I figured Super Mario Sunshine was at least a year after Super Mario 64. Still, it's your story. I remember I had Mario roll in that pink paint when I first got Super Mario Sunshine when I was 13. Still, this is not a good start for Mario. Oh no!

I'm glad that Sae was there to help Mario in court! I also loved the battle with the Inkling and Petey! Can't wait for next chapter!

At least Mario and his friends don't go to jail. That's a relief.

Well, I already know who one of those mysterious people are (but I don’t know her name). I like how Mario was found not guilty for once. And... I guess you make a good point in calling the Pianta a prosecutor rather than an attorney. I only called him that in my adaptation because I looked it up. But I should change it in my adaptation later.

The Inklings did an excellent job dealing with Petey. Fitting choice! I also noticed some of your dialogue was inspired by my version. I like that!

Nice intro! I also added those Japanese exclusive lines into my story. I wonder why they were cut from the English version. This vacation has just gone upside down.

Oh no, Mario got arrested! That's no good, let's hope he doesn't go to jail.

Nice beginning, I am excited to see how this story will go!

This looks awesome already! I can't wait for the next chapter!