Reviews for The Cupboard |
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Glowstar826 chapter 1 . 7/1 It’s really nice and sweet! And for once, Snape seems natural and in character. I have always loved Snape and Harry father figure stories. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/27 Aww. This is so sweet.. |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15 Awesome! |
Jimbocous chapter 1 . 1/2 Nicely done. Thanks! |
Anon chapter 1 . 1/1 not a fan of this :( i liked the themes but i hate how everything snape did was excused as he was also bullied...he gave up a child and its parents to voldemort as he was a death eater, him being a death eater was bad enough - james and sirius were bullies but it wasnt one way snape was just as bad back and probably worse when he became a death eater in his 5th/6th year, it seems like snape got what he wanted as he made harry ‘hate’ his own father, i really liked the themes of this but i didnt like how u made harry hate/dislike his own father and godfather, that part really upset me :( |
HelenFD chapter 1 . 11/26/2019 Loved your story. It's one to be very proud of. Many Thanks |
Sleepyhawk502 chapter 1 . 11/24/2019 Great feel good story. Thanks for sharing! |
PLEASE READ ME chapter 1 . 10/12/2019 ... Gdagit it's like Harry's a puppet what the frinke, look if someone is depressed you don't just, do the stuff harry dose if it were anyone else who was depressed in that sinario it would just get worse anger starts to consume you frustration everyone at a certain point will seem like they hate you and you can't help but hate them back, you can't do those things that way everything eventually everything will feel like a rebuke, just can't function, like your own personal dementor fallowing you eveyware, it gets stronger each day can't keep up eventually, you realized it's over, you just stop, and your body gos on otopilot, nothing gets through like watter on an inmovible object covered in duck's. That are indistrucktable the ducks are... |
Murai-Sakura chapter 1 . 10/9/2019 That was amazing! I normally don't read one-shots but yours was long enough to be small book on its own so whatever. It was really well written! you got the pace just right and the details are plentiful but not overwhelmingly so. I also thoroughly enjoyed the dialogue. The cupboard idea was inspired. Well done! I love these kind of stories and you sure managed to get Snape just right. Well done! Though it's kind of sad that Harry not hates his father and Sirius but I don't blame him. This is going straight into my favourites. Thank you for having written this. MS |
cloudshape to ennien chapter 1 . 10/6/2019 I have only found this story today on someone's favorite list. It is wonderfully written and so in-character. I couldn't not put it on my favorite list as well ;) |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2019 Great so Snape gets away with bullying a child, his excuse being he was bullied, became a death eater, then orphaned Harry, and everything is okay. |
OctavCat chapter 1 . 8/19/2019 This story made me smile so much... ah, that’s Snape for you. Always sarcastic. Although he wouldn’t want Harry to pity him and maybe wouldn’t change on one night. I liked it a lot nontheless |
Lorde Shadowz chapter 1 . 8/15/2019 Very satisfying. Sweet, but not to the point of being saccharine or unrealistic. I am very glad I chose to read this! I especially liked the part in which he possesses Voldemort as well as where he impulsively hugs Sev; well, actually I enjoyed all of their interactions. Nice work! |
Ray Edger The Creator chapter 1 . 7/26/2019 l |
MollyMuffinHead chapter 1 . 6/20/2019 A realistic and heartwarming reconciliation. I love it. |