Reviews for The Story of Four Friends
waitingforloki chapter 24 . 7/14
So , I've always wondered what had happened after Sirius had done that . But now , I feel like I don't want to know . If it's anything like you wrote , I think I'll just die .

YOU MADE ME FUCKING CRY WHAT THE FUCK EXCUSE MY FRENCH PLEASE.
Guest chapter 7 . 5/18
damn why did they all have to die?

also if you need closure (like me ;( ) read some marauders afterlife things, or when harry comes to the afterlife cuz he dies

it helps
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15
That's not how it happened... What about Snape? It was Sirius and James that met first... WHERE IS THE CANON
Iniga chapter 50 . 1/31
I know I'm a decade late with my review, but I wanted to tip my hat to you for your tenacity in writing this. MWPP-epic authors usually plan to cover age 11 to age 21… and fizzle out before age 14. I can see from the author's notes that it took you a few years, but you actually finished!

I liked the female OCs you created to round out Lily's circle. I cringed halfway through when I realized that Keira absolutely had to die for Harry to be without close magical family, and Kelly's death was a real gut punch too. Poor James. James seeing the thestrals was my favorite dramatic scene, with the break-in at Werewolf Summer Camp being my favorite more comic scene.

Thank you for sharing.
samghesquiere chapter 50 . 1/12
Hi! I just finished reading the whole story and I enjoyed it so much! I felt for the characters (particularly Remus, who's always been my favourite Marauder) and the ending was heartbreaking. You know how it ends and still, it gets you. I love how you characterised the distrust between Sirius and Remus. As a reader, you see it passing in the books but rather vaguely and this... this was real. I can only say wow. Right after I've finished writing this, I'll go to your profile and hope that you've written more stories. Big fan here! Love, Sam.
ClavitoyCanela chapter 50 . 12/11/2018
Hey, I don’t know if you are still reading reviews, but I must say: this is incredible! By far the best Marauder fic I’ve ever read, so glad this isn’t just another Lily/James Marauder story (though I like them too). I was reluctant at firt when I sae it was Remus PoV, even if I love him. But it’s fantastic how you develop the characters, your writing is amazing. I have to tell you, this story just became canon to me, I don’t think I can keep reading the Marauders fanfics without comparing them to this. You even got this suspicions between Sirius and Remus (which are canon). Applause!
Guest chapter 50 . 10/14/2018
feel sorry for remus he lost all his friends the people who stood by him when evryone else shunned him
Inferius57 chapter 8 . 8/8/2018
I've not read many Maurader stories, but this the best I've read yet.

]-)
Charlotte chapter 50 . 7/30/2018
Awww this is so heartbreaking. Thank you for being as canon as you could. It was wonderful and now I’m really sad.
Guest chapter 41 . 7/24/2018
i realised why peter was hurrying past. he was a spy. oh god im gonna cry
hester89 chapter 1 . 3/18/2018
thanks for writing this great story. I absolutely loved it and couldn't put it away. the marauders, especially while in Hogwarts, are exactly like I pictured them. I'm going to read your other stories too, and please keep writing! xx
DAML2 chapter 28 . 1/29/2018
It's 5:00 am but I'm a romantic and you are playing on my feelings so hard. Well done.
DAML2 chapter 1 . 1/28/2018
I relate to remus so hard
Nelson0987 chapter 50 . 12/29/2017
Ok I know I’m a little late to the party but this story was amazingly well written and the chracthers were just how I imagined them to be! Please do continue writing!
AyaJune chapter 3 . 11/6/2017
Thsi is really good!
I like how you wrote Sirius, very in character!

Haha i keep forgetting there first years tho ha

I wonder if this is Wolfstar? I kinda hope not

Anyway lovely writing!
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