Very enjoyable story! The wound in the force idea to explain Obi Wan’s strange heart trouble is really interesting, and I love the idea that he needs to get a sort of team together to truly prevent the fall of the Jedi Order. Also interested in seeing what he eventually decides to do with Anakin and how things have already changed pretty substantially from the actions he’s already taken.

Saw your note on Ch 22 and honestly I don’t use Ao3 so I won’t be checking that out, but if you ever post more here I’d love to follow! Again, great job.

I liked this chapter but I don’t think Yoda is being very fair. He was part of the stagnation and inaction that led to the Sidious’ rise to power

YEEEESSSSS! Revan! LOVE IT!

i don't see spock or kirk in this story can i del it

What is Ao?

Ah man I am not a fan of Ao3... their tag system makes it impossible to find anything. Thanks for the update

I feel like there should have been some "than" by then.

...15 years from publishing to the latest update

Ao3 is a new website... thats tricky to use ?

Goodbye grimderp.

this fanfic has been running since before I was born. i am genuinly impressed. With this type of long term dedication, you should seriously think about trying to professionally create your own original stories or books. I definitely think you could pull it off.

I have never heard of Ao3

Noononono
U cant end it there!
Thats the most unfair cliffhanger in the world!
Jokes aside absoulty love the story!

Will you repost this rewrite here as well?

I'm so excited to read this rewrite! see you on ao3!