wow..this was spectacular

Loved it. The style, the phrasing, the ideas... everything.

Made me watery-eyed too.

Deep.

*tear running down cheek* that was so beautiful *tears streaming down cheeks* im okay *sniff*

This broke my heart a litte. :D

Good job! Lotsa

Sarah: ... every naruto fan KNOWS naruto is the fourth hokage's son. seems the villagers don't want to admit it to the prick.

Naruto: HEY!

Sarah: *ignoring naruto* huh, this is... cool, ya know. a

dialogue from the fourth's viewpoint. it's headin straight to meh c2

OMG I have tears in my eyes! Just those last three lines sent me into another tear fest.

(chibi tears) that was soo kawai and sad!

O my... This is my my favorite fic about Yondaime and Naruto. It made me cry. This is just masterpiece.))

oh my gosh...this was so sad. I actually choked up which is so rare when i'm reading. fantastic job.

aww sweet and sad but very good.

Elemental~

Wow...Oh my goodness. This is an amazingly well written fan fic. Oh, gosh it even made me cry! I love this story. Bravo. Very well done. The Fourth...even though we know hardly anything about him is one of my favorite characters, and you hit him head on I think. This is a wonderfully heart warming/breaking story. Good Job!

i loved that line saying how it was the child's life being sacrificed really, never really thought of it like that but it's true. (

Was practically bawling at the end of it. Period.

Your Yondaime shorts make me want to cry. That's a hard thing to do. They're very well done. The simple sentences and short paragraphs just emphasize the emotion in this piece. Again, very, VERY, well done. You're a very talented writer.

"...but you’re asleep and drooling a bit..." That part made me laugh.

Keep up the great work!