Poignant, profound, well-crafted. I like Jiraiya's piece, and how he really could have been teaching either Minato or Naruto. The Kakashi one I feel is incredibly on-target. I adore the part where Kakashi is "having the time of his life." The last sentence, however, is my favorite line of the work.
(Also congrats on getting this perpetual lurker to actually write a review.)

Uzumaki Naruto. Well, isn't it fitting?

i just want to say that sometimes i seek out this fic, from the dredges of the internet i search for it. because it is amazing. though short, it really warms my heart.

I jumps around alot, but good story none the less

I know it's old but I still love it.

Just... amazing. I'm so glad I found you - your writing style is fantastic! Awesome use of repetition. I guess I can't expect much of anything else since you seem to have been inactive for a while... but thanks for sharing what you have!

That was purely amazing. It's always been interesting how all of the well-known teams throughout the generations seem like copies of each other, and you wrote about them perfectly.

Very deep, and kind of haunting. Spectacularly done.

nice

Wow, this is really thoughtful. It's written really well, and I like it. One thing I can't figure out is if the spiral is going out and geting better every time, or if it's getting worse every time. Do you know the answer?

Beautiful -

Nearly all of your fics make me cry. But they;re so AWESOME!

that story rocked you should make a sequal

This is lovely work. Great job. )

very cool!

Really, I'm in no coherent shape to be placing a review of anything, let alone such a wonderful fic as this, but I figured I'll at least post any first opinions.

As I've said, this fanfic is wonderful, as well as highly smile-inducing. I just about cried while reading the portion about Yondaime, not only because it's Yondaime and I love him, but because you've made a character who is hardly shown in cannon-verse into something real (or at least as real as any fictional character can become). For this and more, I commend you.

But, as I've said, I am in no coherent state, and thus, I pray you can at least understand some of this. Again, this is a wonderful fic, and you're going on my favorites list now. :)