Talk about ripping my heart out with one bloody sentence.
Not sure if i should congratulate u or just sob for a bit more but damn

This was so sad. But it was well written.

Oh my god. It is written so beautifully. So full of perfection! The emotions portrayed wonderfully. I don't know what to say! One of the best if not the best stories on fanfiction

Incredibly dark and extremely well written. Everything I like :)
Well done !

I..uhhh...guh

Kakashi. You break my heart.

Holy crap, Chevira. That was incredibly... powerful.

The repetition of 'tying the shoelaces' and 'Kakashi was six, and...' made me feel like I had abused a child (eventhough I know I never would) and was being confronted about it. Then, when I read Minato-sensei was crying, I felt like I was kakashi's teacher and I had failed to protect him.

Again, the writing is so powerful.

The ending line was like a punch in the face.

Well... that was depressing. A very nice insight into Kakashi's mind as a child genius, though!

Oh my. That was disturbing. (A seduction mission for a six-year-old? Yeesh.) But it was incredibly well-written. The way you play with the repetition of a child tying his shoes throughout the story makes that last line absolute win.

Yo.

Interesting little thing you have here. Seduction and undercover missions are always an interesting read, and while hearing of a six-year-old Kakashi having to murder a man after being 'dirtied' by another at such a young age...it's heartbreaking. In all, this is very well constructed, and I absolutely adore the repetitive nature of being six, being cold, and the idea of tying shoelaces. It makes the story seem childlike like Kakashi SHOULD be and yet so eeriely mature like Kakashi IS. This is a wonderful story! So Happy Holidays and thank you for the excellent read!

Ja ne!

UK.

Frankly, I loved it. Your style of writing got me hooked almost immediately, I was enthralled in the way you got into the mindset of both a six year old child, and a shonbi, and then continued to perfectly meld the two persona together. It was simply ingenious.

This is going to be favourited, I assure you. Many thanks for such an enthralling read.

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Wow. This was excellent. I liked your portrayal of Kakashi's thought process and his reasoning. That last sentence was such a sucker-punch. Thanks for sharing.

Wow. That was fantastic, truly and completely fantastic. I love the little tie ins about him being able to tie his shoes (the ending was perfect) and holy crap. I am stunned and really happy to have read this. Great job, poor Kakashi, but the fact that he is so numb to it was just wow

I like that you don't belabor the point of this, wringing the rag of my emotions for every drop of pathos you can get. Don't get me wrong, it's a worthy topic and you wrote it well, but I'm glad you stopped here.

that was good

Oh such good mindfuck! Wholesomely twisted yet painfully real, the ending was fabulous with the different reactions.