Reviews for PositiveTension |
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Guest chapter 1 . 9/15 reading this just made me incredibly sad. It was so well written n |
zeonista13 chapter 1 . 3/1/2017 This is a rather sweet piece. It's nice to have a story about the Sannin before they fractured for good, before the Third War ruined their chemistry as a team. Having Sakuo & Jiraiya be friends is an interesting twist, but I can buy it. Konoha is not large, and the shinobi corps must have interacted a lot. |
Amanthya chapter 1 . 12/7/2014 ...That was amazing! I can't believe how well you pulled that parallel off without being corny. Good job! And especially for the ending. : ) |
floating on clouds above chapter 1 . 5/21/2013 I love how you wrote this! |
Vaughn Tyler chapter 1 . 1/4/2013 nice |
The Leaf 180 chapter 1 . 7/25/2011 the loser has to write a DIRTY book!" BWAHAHAHAHAHAH! |
fiesa chapter 1 . 4/17/2010 Wow! A really nice, wonderful story... I like the way you set the parallels between the two generations of shinobi Especially the "familiar joke" about Kakashis hair was a lot of fun, but also the hint at why Jiraiya writes dirty books... *laugh* And the end - with Naruto chosing his own path - is perfect. A really, really nice story - but I said that already, did I |
skepsis66 chapter 1 . 3/28/2010 I like how you've drawn distinctive parallels and disparities between the Sannin's generation & Naruto's generation. It's fascinating how certain moments can repeat themselves over and over, yet with small variations that make all the difference in the end. |
ladywinterfic chapter 1 . 3/22/2010 whoa. this is kinda excellent. patterns and how they are broken. very nice! |
Shubhs chapter 1 . 9/6/2009 That was cutely-sweet...XP XD XD |
sagemode184562 chapter 1 . 7/2/2009 very nice |
RedRedRosy chapter 1 . 9/28/2008 Sakumo's oppinion of that long hair was just too much, I'm STILL laughing. Great fic, deffinately worth reading. |
Ikabi chapter 1 . 11/22/2007 I had to refrain from laughing out loud (the librarian was giving me Very Angry Looks XD ) when the second section started, because I knew almost exactly what was coming. And I absolutely LOVE the bet Sakumo and Jiraiya made. It's too funny and ironic for words. |
Nukumi chapter 1 . 11/3/2007 “To me they totally scream ‘I’m such a kick-ass ninja I don’t need your weak, safety hair. Watch me as I flick my awesome mullet into your face, puny shinobi!’” |
Eldr-Fire chapter 1 . 7/10/2007 Ah, absolutely /loved/ it. Possibly my favorite of all of your stories. It made me laugh, nearly made me cry, and the parallels were heart-wrenching at time. Genius, I say! Cheers! ~Eldr |