" She was selfish and judgmental, domineering and demanding, while pretending to be this wonderful compassionate caregiver. "

Ah, well at least she realizes what a sad human being she is.

"...who preyed on the sympathies of others to get what they want. He found the perfect victim in Kaori, a compassionate nurse."

I tried to like Kaori. I really did. But how the heck can she be so ignorant and self-centered at the age of 30? She has the mindset of an 18 year old!

Also lying? To a human lie detector? How stupid is she that she once went to the Academy and spends her days immersed in shinobi culture, but doesn't grasp that a jounin can read her body language?

Rude bitch.

And she thinks he's boring? What interests does she even have outside of her job, a job she didn't even want to begin with and now has to (repeatedly throughout the story)convince herself she loves?

If she doesn't have an interest in shinobi history in common with Raido (despite wanting to freaking be one - and how shallow is that?), then what the hell does she expect to have in common with Kakashi?

Answer - nothing. She has absolutely nothing in common with Kakashi. No common ground at all. How does she expect that relationship to last? It won't. Not that such a shallow two dimensional woman deserves him.

Kaori is like a caricature of what Skaura would have grown up to be if she never matured and never got training with Tsunada. So basically pre-time skip Sakura in a 30 year old body.

Pre time skip Sakura is almost universally hated... And now I begin to understand why I hate Kaori so much.

They both even have tiny chakra paths and hair on the red side of the color spectrum.

Holy crap! Did you intend to steal pre time skip Sakura's characterization and shove it in an OC?

Loved the story!

A really great story! I loved every chapter and your OC was enjoyable! I'm looking forward to reading your other works!

Simply great

drunken bitch...wow, that's a bit much innit?. Enjoying the story so far...
Plus Gai really isnt that terrible. lol

Doctors actually visit the patient twice a day, at least I know the hospitalists do. They go on rounds in either the morning or evening and follow up on them. They need to to prescribe medication and stuff in case there are any changes in the patients condition. Granted the nurses are there and have more contact with them and all but doctors have to see the patient. Otherwise it's a malpractice suit waiting to happen

uhmmm,,,.. well, i like the story so far, maybe just a bit irky about the OC... maybe she's a bit pushover or childish or something? well, not an idiot, but simple minded? uugghh, sorry, can't put a word in it... maybe i just don't want GIRLS to make THE MOVES and kinda hate girls being disappointed or angry on some things even though she was super nice at some point at the beginning. too contradicting if i say so myself.. hehe, i kinda hate fangirlism, as i call it... even though she's not a fangirl or something... well, continue writing! (uhm, can this be considered as constructive criticism? well, i just want to help and to blurt out an opinion.. haha)

Wow! I know how Kaori feels with Guy! (But I'm 15 and the guy doesn't shows up at my house with a mutant turkey) the thing is that this bad-looking guy is 'in love' with me and I just try to ignore him (he is my bff's cousin so i can't eat the crap out of him)

Awwww (-) what a nice ending :)

HAHAHAAHA I think the Obito voice is my favourite character now :D

I love this fanfic! :)

It was the best story I've read. I could actually see kakashi saying and behaving like that,which made the story better

This is my favorite Fan Fiction ever. Not even kidding. I was sad to see it end though.

ROFL! HAHAHAHA Tenten and Neji are betting on how long Kaori's going to last. That's just great!