Reviews for A Ripple in the Pond
DJmight chapter 3 . 5/8
I’m sorry, did you just say sasuke has blue eyes?
DJmight chapter 2 . 5/8
I’m confused by the inconsistency of this story, first she was tied with rope and now handcuffs? And that fact that her hands were tied wasn’t at all addressed when he held her hand or took of her shirt? When did he get naked all of a sudden? And it’s so unrealistic for her to be a virgin and in ANBU because part of the entry exam is seduction is it not? Or at the very least that’s what they learn once in ANBU.
margieshort60 chapter 2 . 2/16
Awww Itachi, take me and make me yours and only yours now and forever more always! ! Mark me as yours and only yours now and forever more endlessly ! ! !
NomNomTa chapter 24 . 8/29/2019
Okay I just... couldn’t get over the fact that he raped her in the beginning, and she decided to ignore it just cuz he’s hot? It bothered me so much oof, but it’s a well written story!
Garessta chapter 1 . 7/28/2019
Hello, Lady Hanaka.
I must say, I tried to read this fanfiction twice. First time I closed it on a rape scene. Because, while I am not adversed by this kind of concept, Itachi and rape?.. Really?..
Second time I went through it anyway and fanfiction in general happened to be perfectly fine. Or, well, generally good. Eh... Anyway, thats not the point.
Point is, in the end I was so aggravated by this rape scene, that decided to leave a comment, explaining why exactly it aggravates me so much.
Thing is, rapists in general rape people, if we surmise, not because they are just horny, and not because they just sadists. They do that, usually, becayse act of humiliating and torturing people that way turns them on. In other words, horny meets sadist.
But!
Itachi - in canon (even from before he was shown as "saint") and in your fiction in particular, because after all, this is what we talking about - just dont have this! He dont gains special pleasure from sadism, and he puts all pleasures of flesh at the end of his list of priorities, and his main goal is only power, and how rape can make him more powerful?
So, in the end, this scene is just inconsitent. Its off-character. Its like it features totally different Itachi from the rest of the fiction. Or, more likely, its like it was put there with mind on a bigger plot and long-term character relationships, and fact that it just didnt fit with a character was completely forgotten.
And gosh, this is aggravates me so much!
Pattypattotie chapter 1 . 6/25/2019
It hurts... after I finished reading it that’s all i can say, it hurts.

That is not the ending i look forward to. In just one chapter, it shutter everything so much.

The story is good but the ending hurt so bad (that I’m thinking why it ended that way. Though i trust you author, kudos to you)

Little things just annoy me while reading it, the words like ‘chansandono’ to read at the end of every name really annoys me. I felt uncomfortable reading it that way. That word make it out of their character (so i skip to read it)

In all thanks for this story. It is a good one.
CherryTheRose chapter 5 . 6/24/2019
sakura forgot kakashi when she was remembering her friends... ouch
CherryTheRose chapter 3 . 6/24/2019
okay, ouch, i just punched my eye by accident how is that possible. loving the story so far
ailudelastiernas chapter 24 . 6/20/2019
I love it
ailudelastiernas chapter 17 . 6/20/2019
I love this girl
ailudelastiernas chapter 8 . 6/19/2019
I love Deidara a lot, yeah LOL
oblivious chapter 24 . 12/22/2018
I have only one thing to say about Sakura :

Those who break the rules are trash, but those who abandon their comrades are worse than trash.

Sakura ally herself with people she knew wanted to hurt her friends, but doing that she betray them, she is worse than trash.
FatigueMakesMeTired chapter 2 . 12/14/2018
All I can say is that I’m so very disappointed that you made the love of my life into a rapist. That’s all.
jujubean22 chapter 23 . 10/5/2018
she's having THIS hard of time deciding between her friends that she's known all her life and guys who she's known for like a week (one of whom RAPED HER, isn't kind to her, murdered his family and wants to kill one of her best friends)? Um...
JarJarBinky chapter 23 . 10/1/2018
I believe this is my second time fully reading through this story, part one of this novel. I remain thoroughly impressed with your depiction of a strong Sakura. The fact that it is an Ita-Saku story is the cherry on the sundae. I am leaving a review on this chapter because I previously left one for the ;ast chapter.
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