“Ano” is actually the Japanese equivalent of “um”. If you want to say excuse me, which can be used to get people attention too, is “tsumimasen”.

OKAY TOO GOOD? AAAAAA YOU ARE GREAT! IDK IF THIS IS DONE BUT EITHER WAY GOOD WORK!

What a wonderful story this was. Very well written and quite exciting too. Poor little Kashi - he had quite a time of it didn't he? Your action scenes were extremely well done - I find them difficult to,write but yours were flawless - hats off to you. Favourited :D

Woah, cool fic you have. And it's finished, makes me feel satisfied. I really have my eyes on them now that I realized how cool they really are. Maybe in your fic, once Kakashi grows, he will be as strong as his Dad. Cool one. Thumbs up. Haha

If you haven't already made a one-shot about Kakashi and Mochi meeting again, you should :)

I love this story. It was cute and well-written.

I really enjoyed your story. Kakashi in the store with the little stuffed puppy made me want to cry. Poor kid. Thank you for sharing your story!

Uzamaki is not minatos surname?

Eh, I kinda skipped over a few of the details in this chapter, but it was an enjoyable read. I loved the report back to the Hokage, it was adorable the way Kakashi reacted to the suggestion of playing. It bothers me that, but I can see a few reasons why, Sakumo and Jiraiya went to go rescue Kakashi. Was a good story in total though.

Hmm, I think Minato would have been a little quicker to deduce that Kakashi had memory loss, especially because 1: Kakashi had determined that almost instantaneously, and 2: because Kakashi called his father "dad," (because of the way Minato reacted hearing it). Even though, at the beginning of the story, Kakashi already called his father dad. This chapter dragged on a little, it was still interesting though.

No such thing as a Kusakage. There are 5 kage, raikage, mizukage, kazekage, hokage, tsuchikage, for the villages hidden in Lightning, Water, Sand, Leaf, Stone. Still, this is fanfiction, so screw the technicalities. This counts as a cliffhanger, though it would have been more effective if it ended with the message. Really enjoying this.

Oh, the pains of being undercover...The way that Kakashi used his analytical skills to determine his situation was logical, and in character, and just so fitting.

There's this creepy part of me that keeps whispering, "pedophiles," and "rape," in my head. Kakashi is so cool here, a 6 year old genius. The fight scene was incredibly beautiful.

You never fail to make Kakashi the most adorable child ever. Sakumo's presence was very discomforting, but realistic. I love the situation you've presented and it takes me back to a different story I've read about shinobi using intercourse as a deceptive tool. Love this chapter and that stuffed dog.

This whole story was SOOO good! Although I would've preferred if Minato had finally found out the truth about Kakashi's mother, and be all, well, kind of sad and solemn toward Kakashi, and then bonding time...:P well anyway, this is a great story! Even if it was written a while ago. Keep writing!

I loved this! Completely riveting from beginning to end... XD