| Reviews for Fox Hunter |
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   dylandavisusa chapter 7 . 7/7 Good so far but needs some sin and needs more chapters .ps you should have a ghost rider / IS infinite stratos story that is really long and has 50 or more chapters. |
| StoneTheLoner chapter 1 . 10/6/2017 I feel like you're missing a couple dozen lines of conversation in that little chat Hiruzen just had. Like where are your kind from, what do you intend to do with Naruto, what kind of training, what were you doing in our village in the first place, how do I know you won't..., and etc. |
| redking0380 chapter 1 . 10/4/2017 Telapoting floating rings that came from a spaceship? I see the stargate reference here |
| Annabell242 chapter 7 . 6/9/2016 aww looks like a another fic has died before it truly got started |
| bayoujmd89 chapter 7 . 3/1/2016 Update update update seriously update good story I'm actually getting into this one |
| Kagehana15 chapter 7 . 2/4/2016 please more. |
| hubnnick chapter 5 . 9/28/2015 Yes saga eyes |
| hubnnick chapter 3 . 9/28/2015 A on first poll A and c on second poll |
| zachary12 chapter 7 . 8/3/2015 its ok and nice job |
| EllaJuroku chapter 3 . 5/16/2015 B) Just Hinata. |
| Wolfone10 chapter 6 . 2/11/2015 Okay number one didn't the daiymo put naruto under his PERSONAL protection last chapter.. Number 2 why hasn't naruto gotten transferred to team 8? I mean putting him on a team where one keeps repeating "fight me" so much it's disgusting (when he's already kicked sasuke's ass TWICE! EFFORTLESSLY) and the other keeps flipping back and forth between being angry and scared of him! Seriously you've make sakura look schizophrenic! There is no teamwork, there is no trust, and there isn't even the "sibilance" of friendship like in canon. |
| Wolfone10 chapter 1 . 2/8/2015 How does wanting to protect those that have hurt him, make him the "ultimate hunter"? That makes him the "ultimate FOOL" or "ultimate MARTYR" in my book! Looks like the "brainwashing program" from the leaf DID work. A "hunter" should protect those that are precious to him, and BUTCHER those that try to hurt him or those precious people, even if it's other villagers/ninja that he has to turn INTO hamburger! On another note, you can't keep hinata weak FOREVER you know! She was kidnapped by a jounin when she was 3-4 in canon, that's why she was taken so easily, to do it NOW is an insult to her, to Naruto and to readers! Whatever, I guess I'll read a little more, but if Naruto is put on team 7 like canon I AM OUT! |
| Wolfone10 chapter 2 . 2/8/2015 How does wanting to protect those that have hurt him, make him the "ultimate hunter"? That makes him the "ultimate FOOL" or "ultimate MARTYR" in my book! Looks like the "brainwashing program" from the leaf DID work. A "hunter" should protect those that are precious to him, and BUTCHER those that try to hurt him or those precious people, even if it's other villagers/ninja that he has to turn INTO hamburger! On another note, you can't keep hinata weak FOREVER you know! She was kidnapped by a jounin when she was 3-4 in canon, that's why she was taken so easily, to do it NOW is an insult to her(she is supposed to be good at gentle fist now right?), to Naruto and to readers! Whatever, I guess I'll read a little more, but if Naruto is put on team 7 like canon I AM OUT! |
| Wolfone10 chapter 3 . 2/8/2015 That's why I say he should just BLOW UP THE MOON, they did it in dbz, get's rid of the juubi and pest clans that have never even been heard of. |
| yindragonkiba chapter 7 . 10/11/2014 Loved it |
