Reviews for Kakashi's Very Important Task
KimicThranduilion chapter 1 . 2/17/2017
Aww cute little Kashi trying to do all the. Shopping like a big boy. Great story and realistically told. Loved it!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2016
Alright, let's get this started! The story was cute and fluffy and it made me smile.

But why oh why did you feel the need to drop random Japanese phrases into the text? I'm glad you know something about the culture, it's good to learn all you can, but for us who don't know the language all it means is confusion, lack of immersion, frustration, and a sense of being left out. Having the translations at the start or ending of a fic does little good. Who wants to methodically scroll up or down for a translation and then have to find their place again?

I recognize that this is an old work. Still, there's nothing wrong with con-crit.
Nebelkind chapter 1 . 12/29/2015
This story is really cute!
I really want to read more cute Kakashi stories...
Great story!
:D
Salome Maranya chapter 1 . 5/16/2015
Cuuuuuuute! Kid!Kakashi doing chores just oozes fluffiness.
DecksLeGeNd chapter 1 . 2/15/2015
Gah! So cute!
LaforayaWattpad chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
KAWAAAAAAIIIIII! _
paracuties chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
OMG I find this really cute! LOVE this cute little thing about Kakashi's adventure, when he's a FOUR year old, no less! Keep writing, this one's really cuute!
Error 404 - Talent Not Found chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
Ohayo is actually good morning, from my understanding. Konnichiwa (though cliche) is good afternoon, but it didn't make a difference really, anyway. Though can I just bring up that, YOU MADE KAKASHI ONE OF THE FLUFFIEST CHILDREN I HAVE EVER READ ABOUT EVER. Oh my gosh and the subtle mentions of Minato and Jiraiya and the just sheer innocence of it all, absolutely incredible. I especially loved the scene with the children playing in the field- all the mentions of the characters. You also did a really great job of displaying Kakashi's actual skill despite being an innocent 4 year old; rescuing cats is a type of mission Genin go on, and without any training and alone, Kakashi managed to save the cat. I felt bad because you can clearly tell that some of the people in the market took advantage of him, but he made it through. This is really, really great. I'm a little too excited from reading this...I'm not usually a fluff (I'm going to consider it fluff because Kakashi is just so cute here) reader, but this was perfect.
Shirotori chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
I think my heart just melted from so much cuteness :3
Ciekawa Osoba chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
Kawaii! I love the manner in which Kakashi indited the shopping list *heart*
WitchOfTheWilds chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Oh this adorable :)
Artfox1498 chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
Aa! Kawaii! Kakashi makes such an adorable little kid! -
Shya kitty chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
So cuuute!
LadyoftheShield chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
hehehe, cute!
Aomushi chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
Aw, widdle 'Kashi is sho kyoot! *ahem* Great job with the story. The spicy snacks, by the way, are called wasabi peas. My mother eats them in bucketloads.
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