Reviews for Maelstrom
ailudelastiernas chapter 7 . 6/22/2019
Poor SasuChan
ailudelastiernas chapter 5 . 6/22/2019
You are a pretty thing Toby, LOL
ailudelastiernas chapter 2 . 6/22/2019
Sex toy? OMgggggggg
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2019
Que historia más intensa ,me encantó la dinámica de los personajes
JarJarBinky chapter 21 . 10/7/2018
"No one talks to my man like that, bitch!" BAMF Sakura is my jam!
Rrele chapter 3 . 9/3/2018
On the low, I do want Sasuke and Sakura to get back together lol I’m still team sas/sak
StillBlooming37 chapter 24 . 12/23/2017
Ok so I may have skipped a couple chapters but OHHHHHHHHH I KNEW SHE WAS PREGNANT AHHHHHHH CONGRATULATIONS SAKURA!
Anonimo chapter 1 . 11/26/2017
Good
aww chapter 11 . 11/1/2017
poor sasuke! he's kind of a dick sometimes but he's had a tough life and just can't seem to win!

Shower scene was HAWT
yay chapter 5 . 10/31/2017
loving the story; itasaku dynamics, tobi is adorable and looking forward to see wtf is up with this whole "master-sama" business!

Keep up the good work! Ja!
ISEEYOU chapter 4 . 10/31/2017
I had some critiques before that probably sounded kinda harsh/ like i was flaming (I promise I meant it all constructively, though!), but I'm really starting to like how this story is developing again. Great work!
cathern.cain chapter 27 . 10/7/2017
After reading the first two I thought this would be a trilogy and this was it. I am so in love with this set of stories that I cannot wait to get to the next one.
JarJarBinky chapter 6 . 7/19/2017
"Neji?"

"Hm?"

"…I think Lee has a crush on that girl."

CRACK.

Tenten stared at Neji, then gave a small laugh, which soon became a full fledged one as Lee and Gai turned back to look at them."

Hands down, this is the best part in this chapter. The whole heads-up about the Lee part being kept did not have me thinking this would update happen. I literally laughed/giggled out loud.

"What happened?" Lee asked.

"N-Neji…he…he…he ran into a tree branch." Tenten gasped out, trying to regain her breath.
EmeraldBlossom17 chapter 27 . 3/17/2017
AMAZING
jazzi1234 chapter 2 . 2/20/2017
im so confused. is this a sequel to something?
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