This is great! Random fact: In the original version Harry says to Malfoy something like “But you, unlike me, are a git...” whatever a git is.

So lemme guess. No Sage of 6 Paths chakra, no Rinegan, no friendly Kurama, no god-tier shinobi.

Decent story, although I think it got stagnant towards the end. Plus I would've liked to have seen more of Naruto rather than the Banshee and the Emo King (Sakura and Sasuke). Not to mention sending Naruto and Sasuke away from the battle in the Ministry when they're easily the most powerful of the assembled ANBU.

Interesting story. While I do enjoy the byplay between most of the characters, I'm a little confused why you're making Naruto seem like an unutterable moron. No one would be able to be in ANBU and be that idiotic! Even Jiraiya wasn't that stupid even if he was a pervert. It's my biggest pet-peeve about Kishimoto; he made Naruto an idiot. I'd just like to see a more serious Naruto, not another story where he's a moron. Also, with how Naruto tends to always want to protect everyone, wouldn't you think that Shikamaru would've sent him with Griffindor rather than Hufflepuff? Sasuke Slitheryn; Shikamaru Ravenclaw, Sakura Hufflepuff, and Naruto Griffindor. Sorry about the rant, but had to say it. I am going to continue the story, just thought I'd leave my thoughts thus far.

Naruto doesn't get pairing. So useless for me to read. Suck too i was curious to read this.

Hopefully Fred and George finish up with those special sweets of theirs ( does someone know, how they are called in english. I couldn't find the name anywhere)."

Skiving Snack Boxes is the name of the product.

tsukuyomi

I prefer OCs not be introduced with all their personal details first thing. It comes out as either childish or too much info at once

Excelente

Interesting

YOUR STORY IS AWESOME ! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING IT !

Nice. I like Kakashi having a realistic love interest. I was surprised that that are all in ANBU (Naruto and Assassination just don't seem to go together), but I'm glad they're there as a team under Kakashi. Loved how he found Mrs. Black annoying and that even Naruto was wary of him. heh. Thanks!

The snack boxes Fred and George make are called skiving snack boxes

Respect!

Please no OC. I HATE OCS. THERE JUST SOOOO ANNOYING