lol I can imagine what Pyrong would be like when Mei is older!

A heartbreaking story, but their names were lovely. It makes me want to cry to what happened to Zhen Zhu.

Very entertaining read. I liked how you worked Ren into all this and made this story romantic.

“ Fine, but if I win you have to leave us alone. Just so you know, I have (know) wish to fight the brother of the woman I love, but I won’t be pushed around,”

Hey! Long time no see. This time I am not a fangirl anymore and am just someone calm. ;) Anyways, the word in parentheses is suppose to be "no". It's nice reading your stories again! It's nice how you improved so long ago. I can't wait to read more of your work!

man, this story is really good!

I lol-ed inside when I read the ending of chapter 4, only the undead have the time to corse while their guts go flying XD

am i the only that dosn't see the cuple as necrophila? i can't see it that way becose he has a mind of his own and can move.

Awesome ending to an awesome story! You had the characters down to a T! (whatever the "T" stands for)

I'm glad that I'm finally getting a chance to read this. The premise always interested me, but I have the worst memory of anyone, so I kept forgetting.

I really like it so far! I've always liked Pyron and Jun together, and I'm glad I'm reading such a well-written fic about them. Were his children actually named in the manga? I can't remember, but it doesn't matter, because coming up with names is half the fun, right?

And sghkfghjgf;geigvuioh at surprisecatalog!gift. Makes me wish I had a guy like Pyron around...except the without the whole dead part. And OF COURSE he'd say "Yeah, bring on the kids!" - he's not the one giving birth to them XD

Naming Ryu's daughter "Eden" was a very nice touch. I was really impressed by that. And the Tamao/Kurama pairing was another pleasant surprise. I love YYH as well (it'll be one of my next targets), and I'd really like a fic about how they got together like you mentioned at the end of this chapter.

Overall, I find this fic very enjoyable. The little details you include really impress me and, I think, make it all the more enjoyable. I haven't caught up yet, but I promise I will, and review more then. :D

Wow, but you're a mistress at blending tragedy and happy moments. Ren coming in for the save, Pyron (who previously was incapable of defeating any serious opponent) finishing off the villain, Jun performing a sacrificial act to save her children- and just when I thought they got a happy ending after all that hard work and guts expended, you sweep the rug from beneath my feet without warning with a heartrending tearjerker! This is ManKin, not Shuffle! You're cruel, Secchan! Hidoi wa!

*sobs over the sight of Zhen Zhu being escorted to heaven by X-Laws Angels*

Still, it's a very good read. Pyron throwing down on inappropriate bedtime stories is a joy to watch. Understandable; Wan Mei is the cutest. Daddy Pyron will have a ball keeping the boys away. _

Well done, Secchan!

omg... baby-chans are premature?

whoa, they sure have some issues...

regarding necrophilia... i still wonder how- nevermind update soon!

dude this is so twisted, yet good! first pyronxjun fic ive read... nice! update soon!

NOES! REN! JUN!

*runs to try and help, but is snared by vine trap and dangles upside down for all the local supernatural monsters to cut open for my liver and intestines*

Damn... that was fast-paced... it got my heart all thumping as if I was participating in a marathon... I felt like I was really chasing after the sprinting Pyron...

Simply awesome, Secchan!

0_0 Please tell me Ren isn't dead! Otherwise awesome chapter!