i tend to really hate incest storys with zuko and azula but i like this because it feels like one of the very few ways they would actually do anything sexual together

O.O Shit's gonna hit the fan once Zuko remembers and/or finds out what happened. XD can just see it now! XD
I wish there was more!

I loved this. It reminds me of the song Mordred's lullaby by heather dale. DId it inspire you?

BUM BUM BUM! I imagine Mai and Zuko raising the child, but he would have been taught to be cunning by his mother

That's DISQUSTING. But hey, you gave us fair warning and this is really good, so I can't complain or I'd be a total bitch. Incest just creeps me out. Good job.

Wow.

Just wow.

I was not expecting her to get a kid from that. I can only imagine what a psycho THAT kid would be, haha.

Wonderfully written, and I applaud you for not shying away from something particularly unsettling to most readers. All in all, a good job. Yay you!

Interesting plot. I can actually see Azula allowing something like this to occur, she seems like to the type to want to keep the family royal bloodline going, not to mention she could get back at Zuko at the same things.

Which reminds, Quellie, this is very possible and has occurred before even without the presence of alcohol. Actually incest within royals families was very common place in the past. I believe Egyptians pharaohs could and would married their half-sisters. And then their are some European royals who married their cousins.

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okay, good story but WOW, perverted! That would totally not happen in real life! Even if someone was way drunk, they would not have sex with a sibling! good writing though :)

It's very well writen. I don't think I ever read something like this. Please write more.

I agree with everyone else, this is really beautifully written. The timing, the pace, the phrasing, it all creates a certain atmosphere.

Well written.

not a bad story, make another with that paring?

I love this story. It is well written, but it is the plot that I like in particular. Very original. I also like how you did not specify whether the encounter was entirely planned by Azula or if she just... welcomed Zuko's initiative.

This was really enjoyable!

I'm not really into the whole incest thing, but I must say this was written very well.