This was beautiful, almost poetic and sentimental too. I love how eloquently you wrote this. It's too bad it's a one-shot.. I know this would have been a wonderful story.

*calling Sakaguchi*

me: hell, this story is great. what do you think?

sakaguchi: KAWAIII!

me: you're damn right.

“Rinoa, even if the whole world hates you, I will always be your knight.” This quote was so beautiful! I love Squall, he's such a sweet guy!

Very nicely written!

... sniff... That was sooo sad, but comforting at the end! This is definately going into my favorites! Continue the great work!

Sakura _~

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that was damn beautiful. _~

That was so sweet

Almost like Romeo and Juliet.(just not star-crossed)

WOW! I like! Make a sequel!

I like it! It kicks ASS! Really sweet. I love it.

I like how the title fits her despair.

This was such a good story. _0 I loved it the first time I read it and the second time as well. :) Please keep writing, you're very good at it.