I don't know why people start something but never ended dissatisfaction and disappointed

Ch 4
This is nice and all, but if naruto can detect a high level shinobi like minato, and minato can detect kakashi, how the fuck did both not notice sasuke. Really sloppy for shinobi

Just want to say that I am really impressed with this story. Excellent writing, wonderful progression of the plot, great charecterization, and everything is just so interesting. Overall a really good read. It is a shame that the story is discontinued as I would love to see what happens next, but life happens and stuff like this is unavoidable. Again, really great story, while not complete, I still really enjoyed reading it.

Gosh darn it! I've got nothing against Sakura but I think the chances of her beating Tenten are slim.

Geez, Sakura is almost turning into a minor mother-hen.

I think you have done a wonderful job and hope you find the writing spirt again. I have really enjoyed your story and look forward to seeing some of your other works. Don't let all of these negative Nancy's bring you down, you had the courage and the passion to do this. Good Luck in all of your endeavors.

kinda sad its discontinued but I thought I'd tell you that this was shaping up to be a great story. and what's written so far is very well done. just thought you should know...
~Kat

I can see why you don't want to write anymore...; I went to the review section to see if anyone adopted this story and all I saw was hate about either the hiatus or how Naruto is a bit OOC.

It's your story! You can write how ever you want and it's based on how you interpret what the characters' would do in certain situations. Since Naruto is super intelligent and much more sensitive (plus he's 13 not 16 when he originally finds out) and poured every last ounce of trust into Minato, I can see why he acted the way he did.

I also understand the hiatus. You have a LIFE to LIVE! Just like me and the other readers. You need to get an education to get a job to make money. FFN doesn't really help you except for in the creative writing department. Sure, I'm upset that this story isn't going to be continued by you, but I know you have a life to live!

So good luck with your life!

Villagers chasing Naruto? Goodbye

Ok, This is to all the fucking rude ass comments that the author absolutely DO NOT deserve! I don't know who the fuck you think you are spewing such entitled bullshit about being disappointed and guilt tripping them for not continuing and then have the gall to leave a nasty comment.

Fanfic authors owe you ungrateful fucks nothing and that they take time and effort to write and share a story for free with us readers is incredibly generous and you pay them back with disgusting comments about how YOU are disappointed and how they OWE it to you to continue. If you have nothing nice to comment beyond "continue" and "why did you stop, i want more" then don't comment at all.

You are forgetting that authors have lives outside of fan fictions too and if they don't want to write anymore you have no right to demand that they do, it is infuriating to see so many awful comments.

And yes, this is especially directed to the Guest on May 30, you're a fucking dick and i hope your nasty ass leaves other authors alone because your entitled and spoiled behaviour is disgusting.

To the Author of the story, I hope you have a nice day and don't feel obligated to keep this story up if the comments are too much. You deserve better! Also, if you change to Ao3 you can better monitor who gets to comment and you can disable guests all together.

What the? Oh man now I'm disappointed. I would love to read more new chapters

Well since you did make the mistake in the next chapter nineteen. I can safely say we kinda look down on you for that mistake. This isn't naruto's personality, mask, appearance. Or anything for that matter. Nor is this choice of naruto running from a problem. Did you not research the story well enough? If this is anything to go by I think the rest of your stories are terrible. Is that what you want to hear from us? If not pick up your act and actually make the story interesting in a different matter. Such as following the minor mistake with that fox demon vs the kyuubi no kitsune. Since the false appearance of naruto kinda ruins the rest of the story I'm gonna leave to find something decent. And I'm sorry to say I'm not going to read anything else you've written. I want to find something that actually shows who naruto is without basically misunderstanding his situation and what is actually known of him. Not that I mind physical appearance changes its the personality. If you make him quiet that's fine as long as his goals, nindo, and family such as namikaze's and uzumaki's remain the same. And no misunderstandings of the story. I know demons are mentioned but that's a nickname for the bijuu. Adding demons make us readers face palm. Such as people who just know of naruto and people who watched it. Then after that the fangirls and fanboys of naruto. We all face palm.

Making naruto overreact like that? I'm sure you know how naruto acts. He wouldn't do that kind of thing believe us readers we know. It's a simple mistake but if it happens again your probably gonna be looked down upon for terrible research skills as a writer. Mainly because you didn't completely research the naruto series thus causing problems. You should be lucky it's only minor. Any bigger and people will think your an obvious idiot and stop reading to find something decent. Hell they probably won't even read any,ore of your stories. Reason? If the terrible story is something to go on the rest of the said writers stories must be just as bad. Contemplate on that. I'm gonna go now.

With the demon hunting business you kinda ruined it for us. I think more so for the naruto fans because the kyuubi isn't a demon but a chakra construct given consciousness. But seeing as you might not have read or watched the naruto series it's understandable. But not forgiven. Your probably seen as an idiot here on fanfiction given the amount of readers who are naruto fans. Well cya, and you might want to make a new profile because readers tend to avoid crappy writers in order to find decent stories. Even if you improved they won't come back. That and you need to improve still after you make a new profile. Ja ne.

that was good keep the chapters coming