Good story but Time Lords and Ladies don't have bedrooms.
The Doctor in old who (5 I think, top of my head) was actually baffled by them.

Gallifryeans sleep for a single hour, rather than a Human's 8

All I can say is Awwww

This whole oneshot was just perfect! I always wanted to read a good fic with the Doctor "raising" Jenny, and here it is! *w*
I couldn't stop "aww"-ing! x3

Some people wait a life time.
For a moment like this.
Some people search forever
for the best fanfiction.
Oh I can't believe it's happening to meee.
Some people wait a life time
for a momeeeeent
Like thiiiiiiis
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I reaaaaaaally hope you write more stories like this. It would certainly make my entire life pleasant.

You write such nice fluff. I keep finding myself "awww"-ing. You write really well, when it comes to both the storyline/characterization and spelling/grammar. You also have great story ideas, like Martha and Ten having tea, and Jenny coming back.

D'aaaaawwwww. I LOVE this!

this is.. this is just.. this is heartbreakngly beautiful and i both hate you and love and please send this to moffat so he can make this canon.

Cute! XD

This is-this is-d'aaaaaw. On big ol' heart melting from the sheer awesomeness of it all.

cool

awww...

So cute and such good characterisation. Instant favourite.

Awwww! It's so heart-warmingly sweet! I love watching the Doctor and Jenny bond over all these little similiarities, he's such a wonderful father.

Yep, definitely like this one, too. I liked Jenny. I thought she had a lot of potential, but I doubt if we'll ever see her again. And why yes, thank you for wondering, I am just going down your list and reading most of everything you've written :) It's much more entertaining than the vertebrate zoology notes I should be reading.

Great little series of scenes. I really wish they would show Jenny again, interacting with The Doctor.