Reviews for Thirteen
Deltajoshua12 chapter 3 . 5/24
I enjoyed this story 10/10
COBRASTEVE chapter 1 . 6/15/2015
Wow! I don't know what to say...a storyline in which they both dissolve in LCL. I gotta read CH 2 before I say anything. Jeez, that's some Imagineering!
Greymon Leader Batx flashpoint chapter 3 . 9/16/2012
nice
Rose1948 chapter 3 . 7/26/2011
Nicely done. Angst without wangst yet there's comfort there. Thanks for sharing.
x chapter 3 . 9/2/2010
excellent story
DragonMaster4872 chapter 3 . 2/4/2010
Awesome. I always enjoy these Misato get turned back into a teenager fics. I don't think there is a single one I don't like. The difference what I liked about this one though is that Misato's age reversal didn't have anything to do with Unit-01. Instead the Misato thats been living with Shinji and attended college with Ritsuko and Kaji is a clone while the real Misato is actually in cryogenic sleep thanks to the Bastard King and his minions. In fact this gives me ideas for my own Eva stories I'm currently brainstorming. Also I hope you get back into writing soon. I miss your detailed and long Shinji/Misato stories. Thy're not enough of those
Phantom 4 Life chapter 3 . 7/19/2009
Ah my friend! Truly i must thank you for taking me on this cute little rollercoaster ride. Truly this story deserves many more reviews. I love the way you worked out all the angst. My hat is off to you sir.

-P4L
Meatzman2 chapter 3 . 6/23/2009
Well this fic, to put it simply, fluffed out. You had an epic first chapter, which had me on the edge of my seat at times wanting to know what was in the tank. You let it down in my opinion with a devolution into a rather fluffy romance.

Interesting, but what could have been something special burnt out into merely a better than average fic.
Moonlith chapter 3 . 3/31/2009
It was quite a nice short story. Some of your humor I didn't really appreciate, and at times the dialogue between Misato and Shinji felt a bit cheesy, but no bigger complaints. Thanks for the read, and hopefully you'll get back to writing again soon. :)

Moonlith
Mike Kromer chapter 3 . 2/9/2009
Awh man, you got the title right, I had no idea what it was refering to untill I started reading, had that ah ha momoment with the light bulb over ya head fealing. Loving it, hope this isn't the end, keep up the good work, yet another masterpece of another take to the overall story/ cannon thing, keep up the good work
blackdeathmessenger chapter 3 . 1/26/2009
certainly a different take on the ending of the series,which is not an easy thing to accomplish, since alot has been done with story,though the build up of the relation ship should have taken a little bit longer than it did,though there's a whole two years that is left out of the story,which ,good story,i just wished everyone wrote a little more like this.
CrazyKidDeath chapter 3 . 10/8/2008
interesting plot and well writen, very enjoyable to read
Mr. Lee chapter 3 . 7/31/2008
Hey there old friend :). I checked out the final chapter, finally LMAO XD. Screw it up? Kami forbid! You did a great job as always. As I mentioned last chapter, I had a feeling that Misato's sin against Shinji would surprise me, and you certainly did not dissapoint. What she did was very un-Misato like since it was Shinji she did it to. But I can understand her reasoning, even though she nearly borderline raped the boy. You can't hurry love, as the classic song goes. I'm glad that everything was settled nicely and that they can live normally as just two hormonal teens. But I expect no less from the coffee drinking ShinjixMisato Canadian king :)! Try to say that five times fast ROTFLMAO XD.

Well, I'm not sure what you'll come up with for your next project. But I'm sure it'll be quality stuff. Until then, may the gods continue to be in your favor, my good friend. Later for now :).
Genomaxis4005 chapter 3 . 7/23/2008
Screw this up, no way. I whole-heartily enjoyed this conclusion.

It's good to be complete.

I'm kinda surprised about what happened between Shinji and Misato though.

But they are human and stuff happens I guess, though odd time for it.

Shinji though... I think he could have swung either way.

He could have taken the chance or ran, it was a 50/50 shot and this one he ran.

But anyway it's great that they cleared the air between them and got together.

You know I got an odd image while reading this; I was seeing Shinji and Misato dancing to the song Forever Young by Alphaville in front of that fountain but at night, I know odd thing to think of but hey it happens.

Anyway yeah good job and thanks for writing this wonderful story.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/22/2008
This is cute. It wanders a bit but it's cute.

I don't think Shinji would have resisted, either at 14 or at 16, if she had ever made a serious attempt at seduction, though. I always thought he was very attracted to her. A certain scene in End of Evangelion demonstrates that he's a horny little SOB, too.
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