Reviews for Runaway
iacopo.passerini chapter 1 . 15h
Ottimo! Un inizio interresante!
Nkhamer chapter 11 . 6/2
Great fic. You really had me when the were pretending to be weak.
Love Garra’s loyalty to Naruto and BAMF Hinata.
Thnx for fitting in Shikamaru and Ino and not making them jerks/killing them off. Choji was a shame.
F Danzo and Sai
anatherone chapter 7 . 5/6
Is that... a pirates of the caribbean reference?!
Bluewarrior3 chapter 7 . 2/17
Ughhh bro! You really ruined this story. I was actually liking it. But then temari is pregnant and married to naruto and hinata? What. The. Fuck!
Next time please dont trick people into reading this. Next time put naruto/hinata/temari, Because i hate the sharing crap
Cranky Monkey 699 chapter 12 . 11/17/2019
Sadly knightx never got past chapter 1. But I really liked this. The true hidden village twist was a nice and pleasant surprise.
lara5170 chapter 12 . 1/26/2019
Cool beans but I wish there was more from you.
lara5170 chapter 9 . 1/26/2019
I'm enjoying this story.
Monster King chapter 12 . 11/3/2018
Great story
my 2 guys chapter 12 . 9/19/2018
that was good keep the chapters coming
Snazzy chapter 11 . 8/22/2017
Damn that was good..I have goosebumps lol
Guest chapter 12 . 4/24/2017
Next chapter
Spacecore94 chapter 7 . 3/8/2017
This is one of the funniest depictions of gaara i have ever read. Thank you so much for making this.
Reymen chapter 3 . 12/9/2016
So to prove that they have changed and dont abandon their ninjas, they abandon their ninjas...
Good going.

This is one of the biggest problem with many of betrayed Naruto. When they try to get him back Naruto is ALWAYS some kind of reincarnated god of mary sueism.

Everything He says are taked as gospel and hit straight at the point and the sorry mortals cant do anything else except cringe and beg for forgivness.
His power is that of ledgends, some way He manage to discower the forgotten art of awesomness by the power of training himself without teacher, or ledgendary teacher that the world belived was gone because they are to awesome to still excist, but really they where only increasing their awesomness by the art of teaching themself in the wilderness.
No mather that He have no support structure and no easy acces to teachers nor equipment. All the time spend getting food and running from hunters only serve to magically strengten him and give him more power to His Words.
Dont forget that for some reason the stupidness is proportional to the evilness of everyone, no mather that they have been foiling everyone or leading the nation up to now. No they Opose Him so they imediatly get enfebled.
loo2520 chapter 11 . 11/26/2016
I was actually crying many times during this
Guest chapter 2 . 9/4/2016
*sigh* And it was all going so well. The first chapter was nice, but your character interactions feel a little stiff, and, I'm not really sure of the perfect word for it, but I think premeditated works. It's just that the people don't say and do things the way they would 'because that's who they are and that's how they'd do them,' but more because you want the story to go in a certain direction and you're kinda shoving the characters into really unnatural actions to get it there. It's not really the most enjoyable thing to read. Moving on to the next chapter anyway. My username is Steavatron by the way. just can't be bothered to log in.
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