Ok so love the story so far but found a plot hole. Like the sharingan the buakugan can not see through the hidden mist jutsu because the mist would be saturated with chakra. They would only be able to tell the mist isn’t natural. It’s debatable whether they would be help or hindrance in the mist because of that reason even if both doujutsu enhance sight considerably

Well that was an alright story

That is not a fate worse than death...that is fucking mercy...I am a bit satisfied that he kinda got his powers removed but still I wanted that Lil shit stick to scream,cry, beg for death getting fucking humiliated like shit till his mind was mush and then ripped to shreds...I hate that guy so much that I wanna bathe in his blood...fucking arrogant no good fucking asshole...fucking Finnegan ...feel my power bullshit...why was he pardoned in the cannon I would never understand...he just fucking switched personality ln an God damn Arc and that's it...naive fucking crybaby...he is just as evil as orochimaru...if he deserves death than so does Sasuke...idk why people think him as a cool character...God damn same shit over and over and over and over through the whole series...I lost my mommy I wanna cry..I want revenge on Itachi...oh shit I killed my big brother coz I cried for mommy and killed my brother without thinking for a moment and now I cry for nii-san..so I want revenge for leaf village ...oh I know truth now ..guess I will fight...but still control the tailed beasts coz I can... nothing changes in his character..like a fucking broken raido which is constantly sulking and killing people...and people somehow like him...anyways this was a good story and I really liked it...but I would have loved it more if there was Sasukes blood flowing like a river...

Actually they do. I spent time there in the military

Cool story and I really like how you ended it. Bummer that the duck butt died in the end but oh well. I also really enjoyed those A/N you added at the beginning and end of the chapters as well. I needed something that was a bit funny at those times so it worked.

Bitch naruto

Prouder is not a word

Karin's fighting ability? A lot like zetsu's, so ALMOST NON-EXISTENT. Both are next to useless in a fight. Also why didn't naruto just use his father's jutsu? With that he could have taken sasuke to pieces EASILY.

If naruto is powerful enough to single-handed take out a ninja village and knows the flying thunder god why didn't he just teleport away OR just take pein down right there?

This chapter was gay as shit

Fucking weeaboo

It was ok, but the insertion of the legendary warriors and Demon king kind of ruined it a bit for me. But I still enjoyed it and think the ending could have been better maybe a chapter on Sasuke's life after his chakra is sealed or something from his pov.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

aside from the whole deal with Kyubi this story isn't to bad so far. I know it's been quite a while since you finished this an started on other stories (one or two of which I believe I may be following lol) but still the fact that you decided to completely forgo the fact that Kurama was sealed in Kushina an blamed the attack on Pedo Snake is just stupid. Also seriously storing the Yin half of Kyubi in a scroll? That's just a massive plot hole as if a scroll could hold that power then Minato didn't need to seal it in Naruto at all he'd have been able to split the Kyubi an put it in two different scrolls an send it off with the Toads which is pretty much out of Obito or Madaras grasp

I could kiss you for this amazing masterpiece. I loved it! Thank you

that was good keep the chapters coming