Reviews for The Gift
Xapa150 chapter 33 . 5/11
Gracias
Daggerxxx chapter 10 . 9/10/2019
Fucking crazy bitch
I really hate this Misato
Pyromania101 chapter 28 . 7/7/2019
Wish Punishment Rei had gotten more focus. Meh, oh well.
Pyromania101 chapter 12 . 7/7/2019
I don't like FMP. That bitch Kaname ticks me off.
LordMentat chapter 33 . 9/13/2018
Quite glad I found this. Kudos.
TigerJacob chapter 33 . 7/11/2018
Got an evangelion craze after reading wild horse thesis and wanted to read some romance with all the characters. A mixed bag truth be told, should technically be in the crossover section, but then again if you did that I'd probably have never found it.

Speaking of the cross over, while it one way or another allowed weak willed shinji a companion to advance the otherwise not going to happen romance plot it still had in some ways trouble blending, but overall gave us the final chapter and led to the au alterations.

I was expecting for more lemons and romance, but at least you gave us one for each girl (I think there was at least, reading through 200k of a trail mix containing fluff, romance, canon, and a Hallmark channel drama story, kinda takes it toll on mental faculties). As you said the only way to get better is to put the time in working on it.

The action and combat scenes...are not your strong suit, canon combat glanced over understandable, but the final battle you wrote was filled with plot holes and was hard to understand what was going on.

Overall though it was a decent fic and gave me the fix to my misato (and really the rest of the girls) romance craze and truthfully I don't see many (any) eye catching evangelion fics beyond you and the other so my journey is completed. Thanks for the read.
tamagat chapter 1 . 6/26/2018
Louise Cypher, saying it a couple of time ya get lucifer!
what the fuck?
12954086 chapter 33 . 5/31/2018
Wonderful story. Wish there was more of the impressive lemon in it. Seriously, first time of Shinji and Rei, so hot.
Dragon Man 180 chapter 33 . 5/12/2018
A very good fic, nice mix of lemons and plot. I love how all of Shinji's girls get their own quirk. I can totally see him railing all his girls on Gendo's old desk before burning it as a giant FU to him. I do have to wonder what happened to Yui at the end since she isn't mentioned, same for the other secondary couples.
anon chapter 1 . 3/13/2018
More like Das Gift.
MalasLaBro chapter 1 . 1/24/2018
Nice.
MalasLaBro chapter 1 . 1/24/2018
Nice.
Useful76 chapter 33 . 11/9/2017
Well for something that started out as a joke, this was better than 99% of the stories on the site. Absolutely well done. I laughed I cried I laughed some more.

Need a break then I'll dive back in to your catalogue in a few days. Love your style.
Useful76 chapter 4 . 11/7/2017
Ha! Ritsko's response was priceless. "Go on." Love it. This story is way more bonkers funny than your newer one. Love it.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2017
I can't express how disappointed I am that you decided to insert a Lou Cypher into an AMG crossover and didn't go the whole way into making it into a Petey Wheatstraw crossover as well. Instead of the goofy bishonen you used, he could have been a distinguished elderly African gentleman in a red track suit.
It would have even made more sense, as you damn near ripped off the plot from that movie and shoe horned it into Evangelion.

And no, not having ever heard of the movie Petey Wheatstraw, The Devil's Son-in-law starring the amazing Rude Ray Moore is no excuse! :)
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