Reviews for The Egg
bauers374 chapter 1 . 1/27/2019
This is an accurate summary of an outsider's view on a baby...
TemeraireLoverTamara chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
okay ì'll be a good girl and review haha it was really fun to read and when i say fun i mean FUN haha
JovianJeff chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
That was fantastic! You've either done your research, are a parent or have taken care of newborns, either way, you've translated well how it might been seen from not just Lily's eyes, but a dragon's. However, it was also wonderful to read that over the years how Lily really hasn't ever forgiven Riley, despite how the latter thinks she might have and this story was written so he could think it, but it also makes clear the reality of it. Wonderful work and thank you for writing and sharing it.
titpuce86 chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
I could totally see Lily behaving like that. The scenes in Ivory Empire where she's all a-flutter about the egg's safety made me laugh so much when I read them. And the wedding of Catherine and Riley! I love how you depicted Lily and her vision of the world. Great job on the story!
Temrerlover chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
Awww. Lily is my favorite character. She WOULD call Harcourt's son Egg. Lol. Write more stories. Please?
maipigen chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
I LOVED THIS! The way you portrayed lily's feelings completely sum up what I think is going on inside of her. I loved that and hope that in this world Eggs will be her captain even though she's a longwing.

Thanks for writing this I loved it!

happy writing

ditte mai

denmark
Kat aka SongsOfSpring chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
Aww that's so cute! I love how his nickname is "Egg." You should write more Lily pieces, maybe even about Egg! D
SelenityHyperion chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
Hehe I could see Lily thinking this...nice job.
Obi's Second Cousin chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
*giggles* Oh Lily... *attempts to hug Lily* This was cute.
saoirse09 chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
I like it.
SoaringFyreByrd chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
You captured Lily's character very well :D And I love how the child is "Egg" XD Awesome job .
The Wall Had It Coming chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
Ah lily. We understand. How could you not dislike the egg at first? It did take your captain away from you. And after the last few books, i don't blame you for calling Riley "that awful sailor".

If you would be interested in posting this on my fansite, which had a fic section, please reply to this review. I would be very grateful, as i'm just starting out and need all the help i can get. If you would be interested, please reply to this review and i'll pm you with the link.
Tavrin chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
Egg... LMAO!

really nice story!
SirenoftheStorm chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
I just love how even years and years after he 'hatches', he remains "the Egg" to Lily! I like your writings from the dragons' points of view in general. I do love Laurence, but there's just something about the possibilities for telling the story in the dragonish perspective that I wish we could see in the books.

There need to be more Temeraire dragon fics on here! By which I mean fics focusing on the _dragons_ rather than on Laurence suddenly magically turning gay and sleeping with various members of his crew. (Even if he were gay, he still wouldn't sleep with his subordinates; it would not be proper military discipline and you know how he is!)
Beboots chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
Aww... I really like the idea of this fic. :) I LOVE the idea of all of the dragons and even some of the humans referring the Catherine's son as "Egg". XD It's an awesome nickname. I think that your Lily was very in-character, to be so jealous of something apparently so useless. ;)

I'm off to read your sequel right now! :D
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