Reviews for Master of the Omnitrix |
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KatoGS123 chapter 5 . 6/14/2019 Next chapter? |
CloverFiend chapter 5 . 1/28/2019 I realy like this fanfiction |
Fanfic9000 chapter 4 . 1/5/2019 i am loving this story even more, please make it a big storyline with a naruto maried to his wives ending at least |
Fanfic9000 chapter 3 . 1/5/2019 i instantly followed and faved the story and author after i read this chapter |
Fanfic9000 chapter 2 . 1/5/2019 xenomorphs have to be added now that you said it, and the sub species of them |
Edmonton58 chapter 5 . 3/20/2018 Goop, ryoko, covenant elitle-arbiter |
Edmonton58 chapter 4 . 3/20/2018 Mewtwo |
lalo80 chapter 2 . 5/22/2017 Buen relato, porfa actualiza pronto. Y que sea de harem entre Naruto y las chicas de su equipo, incluyendo a Kurenei y con partes lemon |
shawn chapter 1 . 11/22/2016 can you continue this please? |
Akefiana199 chapter 5 . 8/2/2016 Add more chapters please |
animematchmaker17 chapter 5 . 3/26/2016 you should use rath at some point he always makes fanfictions funny |
Loyal Reader chapter 5 . 12/20/2015 Spider monkey for pranks |
ztron24 chapter 5 . 10/22/2015 Brilliant story hopeing for another chapter |
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 4 . 9/9/2015 great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting. Does the Omnitrix have the Omniverse Aliens as well? If not, can you add them? There is this very funny scene where Ben was going into battle and accidently turned into Whampire at the worst possible time. The reason? It was during the day in the middle of the desert. Needless to say Ben started to freak out until Max had enough and switched him to Fourarms. If you want to see the scene go to Youtube, look up 'Whampire in the desert', it's the "Omniverse: Whoops, Whampire!" one I would love it if you did a similar scene. Basically Naruto is about to go into battle, but accidently turns into Whampire. However it is the middle of the day time and he is in Suna (or on the road to Suna). Naruto starts to freak out and after a little bit later, Gaara had enough and hit the Omnitrix symbol changing Naruto into a different alien (Gaara because it would be funnier and he's a native & the most likely one to do it in the scene). I beg you to have this sometime in the fic! |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/14/2015 wow...this is awesome, keep it up and pls try to give it a proper ending gj |